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ante_luce

Decommissioned [Part 2]

Mar 27, 2011 02:06

Title: Decommissioned [Part 2]
'Verse: TFA
Characters: Ensemble.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst. TF cussing.

( *bunny still latched onto ankle* )

'verse: decommissioned, fic, tf-animated

Comments 21

renegadewriter8 March 26 2011, 19:22:16 UTC

YEYYYYY!! Ohooo I feel like Drivetrain's death was not accidental. or maybe it was very good luck that got him killed? *evil grin*

Ohooo Sunny and Sides appear! TWINSXRATCH! XD Really love this! Great job! CONTINUE!!

ante_luce March 27 2011, 12:35:56 UTC

^_^ Luck is when preparation meets opportunity?

Glad you like :3

anavidbookworm March 26 2011, 19:30:03 UTC

I smell a conspiracy and so far it's smelling pretty good. The question is who is behind it.

Loved the appearance of Blue and the twins. That whole scene where Ratchet was hollering at them was classic. :)

ante_luce March 27 2011, 12:36:23 UTC

Heh, thanks :3

bluebirdsoaring March 26 2011, 21:21:02 UTC

I love your part 2!!! Poor Bluestreak, but it makes sense why he's so messed up =(

And Jazz singing about his old ship...mech's still a romantic at spark!!

*offers cookies* part 3?? Pretty please =)

ante_luce March 27 2011, 12:38:10 UTC

:3 Ninja is singing to his new ship, since he no longer remembers Steelhaven. But he held onto a pilot's affection for the ship he flies.

Glad you like ^_^ Part 3 will be along when bunny coughs it up.

gatekat March 26 2011, 22:07:19 UTC

Well, what happened is making a bit more sense, though the more that's revealed, the more I'm confused as to why it's a secret from the reader when Prowl was told more than we were, given his reactions.

Was the new report intended to sound like an assassination, or was it meant more like 'after contracting a severe case of cosmic rust that spread to his energon'? As is, it reads more like the spread was done to him, rather than just happened.

ante_luce March 27 2011, 12:42:22 UTC

Sorry, could you explain that first bit of your comment a little more? What secret from the reader?

As for the news report, there was a typo there :3 It's fixed now.

gatekat March 27 2011, 13:32:02 UTC

That the Guard were memory-wiped and why is the giant glaring one. Since Prowl didn't expect Jazz to recognize him, Prowl was told, but the reader wasn't.

All the talk of how wrong/cruel what was done was, but no info on what was actually done to them. Things Prowl is taking too easily in stride not to have been informed, but you're keeping from us.

ante_luce March 27 2011, 13:54:28 UTC

Prowl wasn't told, and did expect Jazz to recognise him when they met in Part 1, which was why he was quite thrown when the mech didn't, and so Optimus did all the talking with Jazz. Also, he's adjusting to being alive again, finding his feet in a place he's not familiar with and being cautious since he knows he doesn't have much by way of resources and so can't exactly storm the Council demanding things be fixed.

Why the Guards were wiped will be coming up eventually (I hope, bunnies being what they are), and as for how, I'm leaving that ambiguous. Much like how the writers of TFA never went into detail into the functioning of the AllSpark. I may not be at their level, but I can still borrow a trick or two ;3

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eerian_sadow March 27 2011, 04:55:30 UTC

*attempts coherent review*

*fails*

*just gives exhausted thumbs up instead*

ante_luce March 27 2011, 12:41:19 UTC

*giggles and shoves comfy pillows over*