Comments | ante_luce: Marks

ante_luce

Marks

Apr 20, 2011 15:14

Title: Marks
'Verse: TFA
Characters: Prowl. Jazz.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Non descriptive smuts.

( In which certain ninjas are rather possessive... )

fic, tf-animated

Comments 17

wicked3659 April 20 2011, 07:21:29 UTC

Yay! Possessive ninja is possessive :3 I love this fic you nail their characters so brilliantly. Prowl is awkwardly adorable in his possessiveness ;3

*nuzzes*

ante_luce April 20 2011, 07:26:38 UTC

:3 I blame ninjas in headspace *nuzzback* Glad you like.

eerian_sadow April 20 2011, 07:28:01 UTC

aww, Prowl was adorable in his possessive way! and Jazz just rolled with it (as he does).

an excellent read just before bed. ^_^

ante_luce April 20 2011, 07:33:27 UTC

Ninja needs to learn to open his mouth and just ask :p For some reason, I don't think other ninja would refuse him.

Thanks for reading, sleep well ^_^

bluetaelon April 20 2011, 10:04:52 UTC

lol, I like possessive Prowl:)

ante_luce April 20 2011, 16:31:21 UTC

So does Jazz, apparently ;p

anavidbookworm April 20 2011, 11:49:31 UTC

I just love possessive Prowl. :) This was an interesting piece in that there was no dialog but I liked it. It kept a nice slow movement throughout the piece until the end when everything sped up before coming to the conclusion. I think the speed and lack of dialog gave it the feel of a silent film. I'm sure it helps that the main bots are black and white. :)

ante_luce April 20 2011, 16:34:46 UTC

^_^ Thanks, m'glad you liked it. My bunnies are quite an experimental lot :p

sideslip_tf April 20 2011, 11:55:22 UTC

Oh, what a delightful way to start the day! I think I'm going to be smiling a lot today.

Loved how you described what Prowl was thinking all along the way and finally had the tables turned on him. Loved it!

ante_luce April 20 2011, 16:35:32 UTC

:3 Thank you, glad to have helped.