Daydreamers

[antekkereh]

Lost within their own thoughts
Slowly forgotten by time
Peering into the faces of tomorrow
That will never come
Knowing not
What lies before them
Watching with
Their clouded eyes of untruth
Seeking within the distance
The knowledge that is

Comments

[_dark_fire_]

Very nice :)

[antekkereh]

Thanks, I do try...

[hepo]

Just passing.

I see your a penner of poetry.

For me, your poetry is a tad sedate in its manner, although, it has to be said, its far greater then the masses of love tripe I've come across, so I hope you don't mind as I've added you to my buddy thingy list.

Write on.

HePo

[antekkereh]

Sadate? How interesting that you would say that about my poems. I have never had someone call them sadate. Hehe, Though, I agree with you that most of the people's poems that I have read Too... Sappy almost...