Eventide

[antesqueluz]

A murder gathers in the branches overhead
Collective eye gleaming, watching, calculating
Raising a raucous cacophony as the winter rays lengthen,
Stretched thin and pale in the biting air
And shadows gather, dogging my steps and nipping my heels
As the bruised sky bleeds into the west

Comments

[beesandbrews]

Nifty! :-)

[antesqueluz]

Thank you!

[dodger_sister]

Wow. What a picture this,paints! Lovely.

[antesqueluz]

Thanks so much!

[owensheart]

great poem, and the image of the crows in the tree really is vividly portrayed in this.

[antesqueluz]

Thank you! :-)