Chapter Two - Tim Meets Patrick

[antfan]

Here is Chapter Two of my Antonia Forest fanfic.  Obviously all characters based on her Marlow stories, no infirngement of copyright  intended.

Chapter Two

Nicola sat hugging her knees on the battered chaise-longue in the Trennels sitting-room, and stared unseeingly at Tessa and Daks, who were curled up together near the open hearth.

Comments

[mrs_redboots]

Excellent! Thank you.

One tiny minor quibble - in the era of BBC4 and Kenneth Branagh, Rowan's paperwork would have come from DEFRA, surely, rather than Min of Ag & Fish?

[anonymous]

Ooh, I love it. Tim being bloody-minded and Patrick and his damnable tendency to need to be right. Plus the sheer novelty of having Marlows mentioning Iraq and the hunting ban. Great stuff.

And poor Ann, she really does come in useful as an excuse to be annoyed when you don't want to admit it's something else, doesn't she?

Promethea

[ex_lizzzar998]

Very entertaining - I certainly agree that unless he's had a drastic change of beliefs, Patrick would definitely be against the hunting ban.