GinKira Fic: Time Stands Still

Jan 05, 2008 16:00

Title: Times Stands Still
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: GinKira, ShuuKira
Notes/Warnings: Teeny, tiny lime. Angst. Also, first attempt at writing using the 1st person POV. Written for prompt #44 Speak @ 50scenes.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They like it. A lot.
Summary: Gin ( Read more... )

ginkira, yaoi, bleach fanfiction, 50scenes, shuukira

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silverharmony January 5 2008, 11:23:24 UTC
Oh, Kira. ♥ *Hugs him* :(

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antha_aryn January 6 2008, 08:24:04 UTC
Oh, he likes it. XD

I don't think I did him justice this time, though; I'm really bad at 1st person POV fics. *pets Izuru*

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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nnoi January 5 2008, 14:43:13 UTC
Wow that was beautiful you did an amazing job!! I can't believe you were worried about first person that was heartbreaking and beautiful!! I can not wait for more!

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antha_aryn January 6 2008, 08:26:47 UTC
Of course I'd be worried what with you and all the others totally kicking ass with the 1st person POV! :D

I'm glad you liked this one! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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blood_crow January 5 2008, 17:07:43 UTC
Shomg! I wasn't expecting to read this because in honesty I'm not a big Gin fan, or a big Gin/Kira fan. That being said, I thought this fic was BEAUTIFUL! It was so well written, with so much emotion. It was like I could feel Kira's pain. And your Gin was magic :) Now I'm going to go look at the rest of your fan fiction

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antha_aryn January 6 2008, 08:28:18 UTC
:D OMG I ♥ you! Here, have a piece of my heart. XD

I'm glad and honored that you read it and liked it! Thank you SO much for reading and commenting! ♥

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blood_crow January 6 2008, 08:32:55 UTC
XD And I officially love you! You've already taken my heart with this one so, I'm lying dead on the ground and unable to take some of yours, lol. But yes, you must write more Gin/Kira Shuu/Kira. It's so tragic and I LOVE it ^^

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yakunitatanai January 5 2008, 19:08:45 UTC
I don't know if the song fits for the situation necessarily, but Stone Sour's Through the Glass has a bit of a personal thing with me, so...

Yeah. Tears.

It's almost like you can feel the self-hatred here on Kira's part and the Shuuhei at the end was just wonderful.

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antha_aryn January 6 2008, 08:31:18 UTC
Do you mean Time Stands Still by All-American Rejects? Yeah, it doesn't fit AT ALL. But the title was appropriate and I couldn't think of anything else. ^^

And I'm glad my Izuru's pain got through to you (wait, that sounds wrong?).

Thank you for reading and commenting! Your input is always appreciated. ♥

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yakunitatanai January 6 2008, 17:15:00 UTC
XDD nooo, that's the song that was playing when I read it (Yeah, totally forgot to mention that 'cause I FAIL.)

Ahahaha, it's good when the pain is getting through! It's a good thing for the author, anyways.

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letainajup January 5 2008, 20:02:26 UTC
Another Masterpiece ;__; I so wanted to cry with kira, Is wear I was holding my breath never knowing what Gin's gonna do next...that dang tea!

Beautiful work, I like how it was from kira's point of view of both longing for his Taichou and being with Hisagi ~ OOOoooo great job!

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antha_aryn January 6 2008, 08:32:58 UTC
Hey! It's been a while! :D

Lolz, yes, I made Kira really pitiful and heartbreaking this time around. That's how I like my Izuru best and I'm glad it worked for you. ♥

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! &hearts

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