Fic: Sleepless. Hisagi/Kira.

[antha_aryn]

Antha says: "I should be working on my thesis; my proposal hearing is in two days. But what do I do? I write bad fanfiction. Why? Because I am obviously insane. My thesis partner is going to have me flogged. But that's okay. I'll have him raped. X3

Comments

[ikaname]

this is wonderful, as always! ^_^
ehm... i'm not sure what to say...maybe this helps to explain my feelings towards this fic (or any of your fics, i guess): i'm the type of person that prints the things i want to read and then underline and make small notes when there's things i like. usually i'm a bit strict with underlines. but right now there are so many underlines and notes on your fic it just looks stupid. XD hurray for you!

you're so good at setting moods! and describing feelings with just small details. (i'm a sucker for both) it's just awesome! ^_^

[antha_aryn]

Oh?! Wow, then that is a huge compliment! Thank you so much! I'm honoured that you really like it!

Thank you so much for telling me that and reading and commenting! ♥

[mysocalledhell]

awww ... that was so cute and sweet and wonderful and I loved it very much so.

[antha_aryn]

I'm glad you think so and I'm glad you like it! Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[liralen]

Wow... I love your strong Kira. I really liked how you wrote this and how you developed it from where neither of them is sure of Why they're there to suddenly realizing that their instincts had led them to the right place and time.

Very nicely done.

I really like your Shuuhei, too, being self-conscious enough to understand what it was he'd done and trying to fix it even if he didn't know exactly how.

I also loved your detailing of how the night felt around them.

[antha_aryn]

:D You are made of awesome, noticing things that even I didn't even think about! *fails* XD

Thank you for reading and leaving the insightful comment!

[liralen]

XDD You're very welcome.

It's fun when readers find things the writer didn't even think about, but still made sense to them. =)

I'm glad you enjoyed the comment.