Fic: Kaleidoscope. Hisagi/Kira.

[antha_aryn]

I lost the original Kaleidoscope in a moment of carelessness that will scar me for the rest of my life and try as I might, I just can't write it as well. So forgive me if this is all a little...lame...T_T But I made a banner to make up for it? ENJOY!

Comments

[barukode]

Your words are a dance that glide as a perfect couple across the ballroom of my senses.
☆

[antha_aryn]

That is just about the best compliment I have ever received about my writing. Ever!

Thank you! ♥

[letainajup]

OOooo first off I like the pic you used by [info]ceestar for the story and then having it being from Hisagi's POV is just beautifully done!:D

OMG the way he watched Kira dance on the floor with everyone like Ikkaku and Momo (I thought it was cute that also Hitsugaya was also jealous/watching) >D but the ending was the best! WOOHOO Hisagi going in for the kill and knowing he is his in the end - just excellent!

[antha_aryn]

Lol. Yeah, I had fun making that banner. ^^

And isn't possessive!shuu just the bestest thing ever?! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[sphinxofthenile]

Awwww, that was so sweet and extremely well-written!

[antha_aryn]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! ♥

[ruyu]

That was beautiful! (*_*) I like how observant and patient Shuuhei was while Kira danced. The anticipation of them dancing together was wonderful and slightly flirty. Excellent writing!

[antha_aryn]

Thank you! I'm glad you think so! ♥

[saffronlover]

You described the moment in time soo well..I loved seeing everything from Shuu's perspective & how Kira was not too uke.
Very tender and sweet. Thankyouu xoxo

[antha_aryn]

I'm glad you think so! ♥ Thank you for reading and commenting!