ShuuKira Scene 1: Countdown.

Sep 07, 2008 00:15

Title: Countdown
Rating: G
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei + Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: My version of the night before the big battle. A failed attempt at angst. Theme #50 Writer's Choice: Countdown @ 50scenes.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They like it. A lot. >:)
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yaoi, bleach fanfiction, shuukirascenes, 50scenes, shuukira

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calm_isolation September 7 2008, 02:13:15 UTC
OMG!!!

*dies*

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antha_aryn September 7 2008, 08:51:36 UTC
Is that a good thing?!?!?!? XD

::revives:: DON'T LEAVE ME!!!!!!! ♥

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calm_isolation September 7 2008, 14:13:46 UTC
It was amazing!!! I love Shuuhei and his manly tears and Kira clinging to him in the door way it was wonderful and you so got the angst down!

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antha_aryn September 7 2008, 15:08:43 UTC
::lols and falls off chair::

Okay, I think everyone has commented on Shuu-bun's manly tears. I don't think I'll ever look at the guy and not think of his manly tears of masculinity ever again. XD

And thank you! I'm glad you like it! ♥

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letainajup September 7 2008, 06:14:36 UTC
*gasps* I luv that you had it about their battle with guarding the four pillars! Its so beautiful how you wrote this, especially with Kira and the clock and now Hisagi...ahhhh I need to read more! XD

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antha_aryn September 7 2008, 08:53:00 UTC
Ahahaha then I need to write more!!!!!

And thank you, I'm glad you like it. These boys are absolutely breath-taking in their misery, no? (or maybe I'm just a sadist). ♥

Anyway tank you for reading and commenting! ♥

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ceestar September 7 2008, 07:40:00 UTC
Aaah you are too kind! >_____<

This was beautiful as always. Ah the pain conveyed wrenches at my heart! You always leave me quite speechless really, Antha! It was soooo good!! Hyah! Nextchapternextchapternextchapter!!

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antha_aryn September 7 2008, 08:57:11 UTC
::Beams:: Never too kind for you, dear Cee!

You know I love serving our boys with a side dish of sorrow. It's 'cause they do misery so beautifully, especially our Izuru! I get the feeling I'm being too mean to these two.

I wrote this after I saw your coloured pages from the latest chapter of the manga. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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annieroo2 September 15 2008, 03:05:54 UTC
This was so sad, yet so lovely. It was interesting to see that even as Shuuhei supported Kira, he was the one to ultimately breakdown.

I'm really looking forward to seeing you tackle more "chapters". I have yet to be able to cross that threshold as well, so you can inspire me. :D

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antha_aryn September 15 2008, 07:00:54 UTC
Lol. I like a little role-reversal once in a while. ^^

Ahahaha Let us trudge through multi-chaptered works together!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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