Fic: Feathers and Sequins. Hisagi/Kira.

[antha_aryn]

Title: Feathers and Sequins
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei x Kira Izuru
Notes/Warnings: This is smut. And I kind of fail at smut. But I tried really hard so maybe this one won't be so bad? XD
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They like it. A lot. >:)

Comments

[horusguard76]

Fail? What is your definition of fail? This was fantastic! Hot and so wonderful emotional without being too sweet or complicated.

Very well written. The idea of a masquerade was great - I have a think for masks ;D and it worked very well here.

And I really liked that you managed to convey Kira's impressions and perception of his surroundings (and the everlovely Hisagi). Very well done. I really like it when reality merges with imagination and even better when the reader can immerse himself into that feeling as well. VERY well done!

(never let me hear you saying something of 'fail' again. ;) )

[antha_aryn]

::blushes madly:: It's the lack of experience practice that made me nervous with this one; was worried it would come out all wrong. X.x

But thank you for saying otherwise and for the insightful comment!

And all right, I won't, I won't! ::promises::

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[horusguard76]

You're very welcome. <3

And by all means do write many more such goodies (and the practice will come with ease). ;)

[7veilsphaedra]

Lovely smut! The masks were delightfully mysterious. I loved Kira's sense of abandonment released inhibitions before he even knew who his lover was.

[antha_aryn]

Lol. I guess Kira + Alcohol = slut!Kira. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[ceestar]

oh god... oh good god Antha!! I cannot believe it was possible for you to reach some new levels of awesome and win!!

I mean that was... that was beautiful, you handled the situation so tastefully, I'm not really good at describing it... um well what I'm trying to say is that often I see smut with very little storyline. But you were able to weave in such a wonderful storyline, you gave such great detail and this being their first time and all just made it so much more special.

And if all that I just said was too confusing; you win at life. End of story.

[antha_aryn]

TASTEFUL! OMG Cee, that is EXACTLY what I was trying SO hard to make this (though I did not give it a word at the time)! So am really, really, really glad you think it is! I know what you mean, a lot of the smut fics I stumble across crude and just...ick? I mean, yeah, smut is about the smex but it would nice if it wasn't 100% smex? Or at least make it classy smex instead of something out a bad porn flick! XD

And pfffft you are too kind! Thank you, thank you, thank you! ♥

I ♥ you to no end!

[ceestar]

I love you too Antha!!! #>_____<#

I forgot to mention in my original comment, for some reason I just loved the part where you revealed the scars and then just:

Hisagi.

It's like we all knew from the beginning who it was, but when you revealed it it was like .. just this new wave of excitment that I find very hard to explain, but you sure explained it well through Izuru's thoughts and emotions xD

[antha_aryn]

I'm glad you think so! Oh, the power of one word. I would have put it as ?xKira if I didn't have to post it in shuukira! XD

[xxlanaxx]

that was brilliant i dont know what you were worried about! great fic

[antha_aryn]

I'm glad you think so!

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[calm_isolation]

OMG Antha this is amazing!!!!!!!!

[antha_aryn]

AM SO GLAD YOU THINK SO!!!!! <3333333333

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥