Fic: The Undeveloped Story. Hisagi/Kira.

[antha_aryn]

Title: The Undeveloped Story
Rating: G
Pairing: Hisagi Shuuhei/Kira Izuru. Slight GinKira.
Notes/Warnings: A failed attempt at angst.
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of its sexy characters. I just borrow them and make them do my nasty bidding. They like it. It's fun.
Summary: Kira wants Shuuhei to stop.

When it all falls down, I'll still

Comments

[nnoi]

Wow that is great! Of course Kira doesn't know if he wants him to come back or not. I liked that when Hisagi sais he might come back Kira's response it

Just for me?

that is sooo Kira I can almost hear it, thinking he isn't worth enough for him to come back but also havin a little hope deep down that if he came back he really cared....and I love that Hisagi is guarding over Kira

[antha_aryn]

And Gin really did come back, didn't he? Only it wasn't because he cared. *is evil* XD

I guess this story was better off without my killing myself to finish it; the feedback is better than I expected! I ♥ you!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[yakunitatanai]

...Wow, I was not expecting Gin there at the end. It makes me want more. D: But if you've run out of inspiration, you've run out of inspiration.

I like this. A very protective Shuuhei and a very reluctant Kira and a very...random Gin. It's a good combination.

[antha_aryn]

Originally, Gin wasn't supposed to come back but the more demented part of my mind decided to stick that in.

And yes, inspiration. I tend to run out at the most inconvenient of times.

I'm so glad you like it! And random Gin...a most appropriate description! XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! ♥

[yakunitatanai]

No problem~

What other kind of Gin is there, other than... psychotic?

[antha_aryn]

XD

Too true. ♥

[sommar]

lovely undeveloped story!!!
I sooo wasn't expecting Gin there at the end... and I love it when Hisagi is protective *melts*

[antha_aryn]

Protective!Hisagi = ♥

I'm so glad you like it!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

[silverharmony]

Oooh, I like it :3 I love reading about Hisagi being protective over Kira. Shame on Kira for being so stubborn :o

And wooh, Gin. ♥

[antha_aryn]

♥

I'm so glad you like it!

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[purplecoyote]

I love the atmosphere in this!
Kira not being sure if he wants Gin back or not,and Hisgi om the look out,it`s all very good!
*adds to memories*
Also,HURRAH for Kira/Hisagi/Renji fans! 8D

[antha_aryn]

8D

I'm so glad you like it! And it's worth putting into your memories? AWESOME! :D

Thank you for reading and commenting!

AND YES MY OT3! ♥