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Jul 28, 2006 16:51

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walk_the_abyss July 29 2006, 19:46:08 UTC
Dream lingered a moment longer by the bed, but as soon as the one he was observing gathered his wits, Dream was gone.

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correction aga11 February 8 2007, 19:27:03 UTC
Nazi labor or death camps IN Poland.
On Polish teritory.
Polish people had nothing with those caps, except dying in them along with Jews, queers etc.
That phrase in Polish should be "Bóg was opuścił" this would sound more natural.
Apart from this it was really good story. Really good.

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Re: correction anthony_crowley February 8 2007, 20:25:04 UTC
I know that the Polish people had nothing to do with creating the camps. I only meant that the camp Crowley was in was located in Poland and full of Polish people. I'm sorry if that was unclear. It should be better now.

And thank you for the correction. Obviously I don't speak Polish. But I've gone ahead and changed it.

Again, thanks for the notes, and I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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