Coffee

Nov 15, 2009 22:48

Original fic, unbetaed, might continue, since the ending feels a bit unfinished, but who knows? Rating: tame

“Hi!” He smiled as he shrugged off his jacket. “Sorry i'm late - got lost on youtube.”

“Happens to the best of us.” She smiled. “I ordered a coffee for you, figured I'd just drink it myself if you didn't show.”

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coffee, original

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malexfaith November 16 2009, 02:18:29 UTC
Wow, this is great. I like how you explained the feelings, and the whole situation. Hope you continue, thanks heaps for sharing

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zbetter1 November 16 2009, 03:45:43 UTC
Yep, it's a contender, great indepth look into what she's feeling, def worth revisiting and revisiting and revisiting..U get my drift. :)

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anti85 November 16 2009, 10:37:04 UTC
Thank you :) I'll see where it takes me:)

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authorw November 17 2009, 01:17:20 UTC
I love this.
Such raw emotions.
Please continue!

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