Recent poems that I have written

[antigone314]

Someone Please

Why do I feel lost in this world
Why do I feel invisible
Someone pleas find me
Someone please see me

Why do I feel like Im dieing
Why do I feel I've been muted
Someone please save me
Someone please listen to me

Someone please love me
Im starting to fade away

So I Can See

Give me your eyes
So I can see
What you see
When you look at me

Living in the

Comments

[ppl_love_me]

wow...those are really good and yet really sad. love hurts. :( but those are good poems!

[antigone314]

Thanks:)

[ppl_love_me]

no prob.

[ucsbclassics53]

Keep up the good work! The most beautiful words are from the heart...

[antigone314]

:)

[antigone314]

Wow thanks! Sure Ill join! Thanks for the invitation!

[haycee]

Wow, you are a very talented writer.

[antigone314]

Thank you :)

[rancid_munkypie]

so i can see
my request
the scar.

all of those are very good. makes me feel..kinda happy but yet sorry for the ppl that wrote those. unless you are the one that wrote them. but i love those top three. i hope you are ok in florida with the hurricane. please tell me

[antigone314]

Yeah Im ok. Yes it was I who wrote all of those.

[rancid_munkypie]

very good dahling.
i love them.
i am glad your ok. gives me releif