WOTHCS Chapter 5

[aoi_tenshi05]

Title: What Only the Heart Can See
Pairing: TaNaka (and more to come)
Genre: Romance, Drama, Angst, AU
Rating: R for violence
Disclaimer: I only own the plot.
Summary: Nakamaru had always dreamed of finding love that he can cherish and when a man named Tanaka Koki came to his life, he believed that forever has begun with the love that they share. Until

Comments

[haruna_io]

Buhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuuh Kokiiiii ;______;
I'm feeling their pain... you meany sis! T^T

Awesome as always

[dorayaki_chan]

NOOOOO how could you be so cruel (˘̩̩̩⌣˘̩̩̩') (˘̩̩̩⌣˘̩̩̩') mwa ha ha ha ha

[aoi_tenshi05]

gomen neee~ taking out my do-S side right now. hehe. (¬‿¬)

[nikkimattei]

I saw this right before I got off work today!! SO yeah!! Something to read later. This was really good. Poor TaNaka...That yakuza is a big meanie!! (That's a nice way to put it). Can't wait until the next update!!!

[aoi_tenshi05]

EVIL, I should say. (=_,=)

[nikkimattei]

That's what I thought but I was in a nice mood at the time when I wrote that ;P...again good job *two thumbs up*

[skyenopierrot07]

I wish you had posted both this chapter and the next...I hope Koki is ok! I REALLY hope he's ok...and I have a good idea of what will happen to Yuichi...I just hope he is strong enough. Nice work.

[aoi_tenshi05]

Oh sorry! So hard to write the scenes. I'm not really good with action and violence so it took me time to write this chap. (≧▽≦)

I gave fair enough hints so your guess is probably right. (─‿‿─)

Thanks and see you next chap!

[skyenopierrot07]

I understand! You did well! (I can't write action or comedy to save my life) [: You did well. (next chapter?) (I will be patient I promise)

[snow_guardian]

this... is where you left off!? T^T you want me to go to sleep with this cliffhanger on my head!! OMG!! no, koki!! i know dealing with the Yakuza is cruel fate b-but still WWAAAAAH!! KOKI!!!!~
i'll... i'll await the next chapter then...T^T...

[aoi_tenshi05]

Hai!!! Gomen... I had a hard time writing violent scenes. >< And there will still be more in the next. Because Hongo is evil like that! Haha.

So you've finally caught up. Yokatta! Thank you so much dear! Now go get some sleep~