This is cute, the style seems a bit different from what I'm used to reading, but I like it! You switch point of views and the story is told through the characters verse long paragraphs and I like that.
hehe~ i really love this~ its different from your other fikku's~
I'm on the soccer team. And the tennis team. And the basketball team. I do judo. I'm pretty well-built, if I do say so myself. I do okay in school. My face is nice.
haha~ aoi~ conceited [sp?] as always i see~ hehe~~~
holy shit kai!! (didnt like him as much until now) hahaha Aoi and Uruha are damn straight gay together!! haha reita reminds me of the word 'spunky' HAHAHA i dont even know why! but that last line Why do the people at school think I'm cool again? just made me say, CUZ YOURE SPUNKY
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because you are reita!!! why else...?
hehe~ i really love this~ its different from your other fikku's~
I'm on the soccer team.
And the tennis team.
And the basketball team.
I do judo.
I'm pretty well-built, if I do say so myself.
I do okay in school.
My face is nice.
haha~ aoi~ conceited [sp?] as always i see~ hehe~~~
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im really glad you like this ^^
thank you for commenting~
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hahaha Aoi and Uruha are damn straight gay together!!
haha reita reminds me of the word 'spunky' HAHAHA i dont even know why! but that last line Why do the people at school think I'm cool again? just made me say, CUZ YOURE SPUNKY
haha XDD
love your writing in this <33
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xD
thanks so much!
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cracks me up XDD
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Hugs Aoi.
their all so cute, yay.
hoping for more.
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your comment is super =)
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