writing is hard work, y'know?

Mar 02, 2011 23:44

I need to vent about writing for just a second. Don't mind me.

I am writing in third person limited from the perspective of a character who uses very casual, blunt language. I realised, midway through, that I am using the kind of language that he wouldn't touch with a ten-foot pole. There's no salvaging any of it, it's all ridiculous and... not flowery but stylised. And it's not bad writing, either. I don't want to have to go through all of it again but I can't in good conscience let myself continue in this vein. Alas, the woes of the competent self-editor!

I know it's important to kill your darlings when it's for the good of the writing, and I know I need to do it, and I'm going to do it, and it'll turn out for the best in the end. I'm just going to complain about it until then.

writer's woes

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