My Newest Creation. A Retold Fairy Tale with a little twist.

[aosmon17]

Gransel And Hettle

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Your story

[anonymous]

I thought that the story was good. You just need some more descriptive text to tell what the surroundings are and where your characters are. Maybe a opening describing what we are looking into like... "As I remmber that faithfull day long ago in mothers house." But it was good I liked it.

Jon