Weekend at Vasey's, Chapter Six

[aoxelfrieda]

As always, I don't own the rights to anything (except Phillip! He's my bitch!). This chapter is rated R for a tiny bit of language and some sexual references.

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Comments

[aoxelfrieda]

Sorry, I hadn't had time to edit it yet, but it's fixed now.

Looking forward to your comments :)

[aoxelfrieda]

Thanks!

And I loved Marian's dirty dream; hopefully there will be kittens and sex in the future?

You mean you're not shipping Marian/Phillip? Oh-oh! *goes to rewrite ending* ;)

[bookishy]

YAY. I truly love the speed at which you are updating! I actually a little in awe, because it's all just so GOOD.

This had me snickering at my desk:

Guy smiled at the red welt on the side of Hood’s face. “That’ll teach you to talk about Marian like that, Hood. Just because she left me at the altar doesn’t mean she won’t be mine some day!”

“But she punched you in the face!” Much cried.

“And I burned down her house! That means we’re even!” shouted Guy, grabbing Much’s arm, then dropping it quickly. “Sorry, force of habit.”

I love how you have him grabbing everyone's arm. Because he does do that so very often in the show (and in my fic, cause I am never quite sure what to do with him otherwise).

Robin, now feeling that familiar fervor of righteous indignation, thrust his own sword toward Guy’s leather-clad abdomen.

Ha!

She entered the room to find her ex-fiancé and her fiancé, who was also her ex-fiancé

I never thought of it that way, but IT'S SO AMAZING.

Hope he’s not carrying some filthy peasant disease that

[aoxelfrieda]

I love how you have him grabbing everyone's arm. Because he does do that so very often in the show (and in my fic, cause I am never quite sure what to do with him otherwise).

Yes, because we wouldn't be able to recognize him if he weren't grabbing somebody or other's arm! Hehe.

Hee. Oh, Phillip. Is it sad that he says all of the things that I want to say? Probably.

LOL I would totally want to say that, too. Maybe Phillip is my alter ego. Now THAT is sad. I wonder if I have any cheese at home . . .

Thank you SO MUCH for great comments!

[leslieg]

Oh, yes, please, sex with Guy!!!! I love Marian's fantasies! Tee hee!!!!

Giggled like a madwoman through the whole thing, again!!! This is so not a good look at work!!! Thank you!!

[aoxelfrieda]

Thank you so much! :D Yes, Guy isn't the only one with the kinky fantasies, it seems . . .

[bunkie77]

This is such a HOOT, what a wit you are!

[aoxelfrieda]

Aww, thank you. Glad you liked it!

[karen747]

Me too, leslieg1 !!
Definetely NOT a good look at work, and one I was sporting too! ;-) Giggling, snickering...Too, TOO hilarious. I loved it all. My Favs?
- Not-at-all Homeoerotic
- Marian's "Dreams"
- the continually non-present guards and everyone thinking about them.
- “Name once. When I wasn’t in danger because of you in the first place.” Somewhere, a cricket chirped. (FINALLY! Kettle black, much? YES!! Finally someone said it outright. Thank you.) More, please. ;-)

[aoxelfrieda]

Thanks very much! Love your avatar!

[karen747]

Thanks! ;-) All props to "moetushie." So versatile...and true! (heh) I originally got it for Guy, but it works for Xena too. ;-) I like yours as well.
I seriously love your story! It really is so Monty Python/Douglas Adams-esque in its absurdity (high praise from me) and its incredible ability to make me laugh and hoot till crying - again, not a great thing to be doing at work...which is why I am still here. May I friend you?

[aoxelfrieda]

Of course! I added you, too.

And thanks again for the review - I love reading that people are enjoying the story. Stay tuned! :D