The Story of Paris - Part Four (The End)

[ap2187cp]

Title: The Story of Paris

Comments

[hana_xoxo]

I am - god you totally broke my heart *sniff* It was just beyond - and just oh god ... that was absolutely brilliant ripped me heart of my chest it did! OH god, that was just god you totally broke my heart, OH JACOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I feel sorry for Bella, but she deserved it, and I love how the 'haze' went away and god that last paragraph and her in the tombstone KILLED me, you are a truly brilliant writer the visuals and emotions I got from this story was absolutely crazy, beautiful and so heart wrenching. You are amazing!

xoxo
Hana

[ap2187cp]

thank you for all your high praises of my writing. i'm glad you enjoyed reading this story. i'm sorry i got you bawling all through the whole story. sometimes i think i need to write happier stories. i was crying the whole thing i was writing this and also when i went back to edit it. but jake's story in the twilight series was just a very sad story to begin with

[hana_xoxo]

no problem the story was awesome! And I loved how you made the writer Rachel I was soo sad when she writes 'We miss you baby brother' sniff!!

[borntobewild13]

This made me want to to write a story of dead jacob and vampire Bella...but already did that once..so sad...I'm still drifting in the angst while I gaze at the monitor.

[ap2187cp]

thanks for review. i'm glad that it inspired you to write tho dead jacob and vampire bella is just too sad... i think it's time for a fluffy/happy j/b story and your story (Passing Years)is getting there. :)