You set the mood perfectly. I'm amazed at how much emotion you can pack in to something fairly short; every word or phrase seems to count, and it's concise without suffering from a lack of detail. It's hard not to feel sad at the end. I also liked the subtle parallels between Sunnydale and England you put in.
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::cries::
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Whether it came from earth or a hellish other dimension (or, as Andrew liked to call them, Demonsions)
Very Andrew!
You do spooky and unsettling so very well. Loved it!
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Cutest. Portmanteau. Ever. *loves*
You set the mood perfectly. I'm amazed at how much emotion you can pack in to something fairly short; every word or phrase seems to count, and it's concise without suffering from a lack of detail. It's hard not to feel sad at the end. I also liked the subtle parallels between Sunnydale and England you put in.
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*claps* Yay! Creepy and dark and angsty. Just what I like :-). It has a very Lovecraft kind of feel to it, actually :-). Ouchy...
Thanks Abby (or is it Abbey? I forget the spelling now). That was a nifty present :-).
Hmmm... *has an idea* Hey, could I do a follow up piece?
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I'm so happy you liked it. If you hadn't, I would've cried all over the entry, then cast myself and the story off a cliff into the misty sea below.
Thanks Abby (or is it Abbey? I forget the spelling now).
Abby. Like the not-building. :-)
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Wow *impressed* I'm fairly glad I liked it then.
Oh, and you still having trouble with AIM? I've noticed you log on and off quickly a few times...
Abby. Like the not-building. :-)
*nods* Abby is much better :-).
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Nah, just a little. It kept logging me off last night, but this morning I was able to stay on without getting kicked.
I've resolved to sign on more often and stop neglecting it, so I'll probably see you around at some point. :-D
I wonder if I should try to install AIM on the class computer...
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