[suho/kai] worship

May 18, 2015 19:51

title: worship
pairing: junmyeon/jongin
rating: nc-17
words: 6,221
summary: junmyeon likes to remind jongin how beautiful he is.
a/n: pure, unapologetic smut served with a side of sentimentality. written to hozier's take me to church on loop.

Beautiful. It's not a word that Jongin heard very often in association with himself. )

r : nc-17, !fic, i : one-shot, p: suho/kai

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noteholding May 19 2015, 18:09:06 UTC
blushing jongin, all spread out for junmyeon to worship ∩(︶▽︶)∩

everything was so amazing, just the right amount of smut and feelings! i am weak against them driving each other crazy with want and love.
love this to bits ♥

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apocryphalic May 20 2015, 01:44:33 UTC
omg you have no idea how badly i just needed to write this because somehow this image of suho being slightly mean to kai in bed and worshiping him and basically making him come endlessly was stuck in my head for hours. i couldn't get it out of my head LOL and it resulted in this T__T

i'm a fail at writing smut usually so i'm glad this worked out and wasn't like hole here, insert thing here :x i can't ever manage nc-17 usually and my stuff is always r but that's only because i write a lot of death stuff so it isn't even because they get handsy lol.

thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

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carcharias1130 May 19 2015, 23:16:32 UTC
Oh my lord that was just...wonderful. Achingly hot, of course, but also just...so well written. (I guess those go hand-in-hand). Your dialogue and characterizations were so consistent and clear...and your delivery and pacing was just very smooth and well-timed. That last paragraph--that was just a perfect ending line.

I'm just completely left in awe, that was so, so well done. Wow. Just wow. Looking forward to more works from you, definitely.

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daeseol May 22 2015, 04:56:57 UTC
HOLY MOTHER OF EVERYTHING HOLY WHY AM I SO LATE TO THIS PARTY THIS IS WONDERFUL AND HNGGG HOT AND I AM IN SO MUCH AWE. I love the obsession, just right. Not creepy. Romantic and erotic. And I love how Jongin enjoys every bit of it. I just...

Just...

/breathes heavily

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Beautiful <3 unmei100 February 1 2016, 02:16:20 UTC
This is beautiful, so much devotion and love from both amazing.

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