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apocryphalic

[changmin/yunho] just the two of us

Feb 14, 2011 01:36

title : just the two of us
pairing : changmin/yunho
rating : pg-13
words : 2831
summary : yunho always spends valentine's day with changmin and this year won't be any different
a/n : happy valentine's day ♡! homin exchange fic for simp_anna , i hope that it's to your liking! :) would like to note that the beginning of the fic is actually the end, feel free to ( Read more... )

!fic, l : one-shot, p : changmin/yunho, r : pg-13

Comments 32

anonymous February 14 2011, 10:08:56 UTC

Crap.
That was so freaky and awesome at the same time.

I got psyched because it's a MinHo fic and I don't usually read ChangminXYunho
But the summary sounded so good, so I decided to read the comments first, and even AFTER knowing Yunho was twisted I read it anyways and now I'm scared :(
I guess I brought it upon myself, even if I'm Yunho-biased :D

There should totally be a sequel! I hope you write one~ :)
It'll be awesome when Changmin finds out >:D
Then he'll love Yunho, because Yunho is so so perfect and lovable like that.
And Yunho can stop killing chicks :) dirties his hands you see~

Thanks for writing!!!

leia_in_pajamas February 14 2011, 10:10:16 UTC

Oops :) I forgot to log in :D

apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:58:23 UTC

oh! i think you should definitely explore more changmin/yunho stories :DD! they're a pairing that, i think, can be written many different ways :') and don't worry, i'm yunho-biased too! don't be scared though, real-life yunho is much too much of a sweetheart to ever do anything like this :') he's super protective of his loved ones but he wouldn't kill! ...at least i don't think so :O

hmm what would i d for a sequel? D: i do wonder how changmin would react if he found out. he's really so calm and collected normally but then i get the sense that with something so clearly wrong, he wouldn't be able to accept it.

happy vday :) and thanks for commenting!!

haru_no_keeki February 14 2011, 10:57:22 UTC

wow o.o now that was .....freaky XDD

awsome fic! <3<3<3

apocryphalic February 14 2011, 23:59:41 UTC

lol D: my first time writing a non-romantic/fluffy fic, especially for valentine's day! i was surprised myself T_T

thanks a lot for reading! and i cannot stop staring at changmin's face in your icon right now, rofl. oh that boy, he has some awesome faces sometimes :'D <3

haru_no_keeki February 15 2011, 09:29:36 UTC

^^totally welcome.. and lol XD yes he has ...<3

blueplue_hotaru February 14 2011, 13:57:41 UTC

oh~MY GOD!
0_0
................
*hides behind you*

apocryphalic February 15 2011, 00:06:11 UTC

omg *__* i can't stop looking at yunho's lips in your icon skfjngkssh, he's so cute omg what do i do with him T__T i love him :x now i'm just all fangirly and incapable of typing a proper response to your comment!

no need to hide tho :x fictional story so it's not real and hopefully will never, ever ever ever be real!

happy valentines day! thank you for commenting :)

/still staring at yunho's lips *__*

blueplue_hotaru February 15 2011, 05:05:56 UTC

hehehehehe
yun is your bias too?
*points to my icon*
how about this one? yun pouts again! kkkk

aigoo, i love this kind of genre actually and the way you write it is just 0_0

happy v day too!

*points at my icon again*

kkkk

wox666 February 14 2011, 14:26:41 UTC

VERY HARD !YUNHO hahaaaa

apocryphalic February 15 2011, 00:10:21 UTC

LOLOL! yes, very hard!yunho xD he's a tad psychotic here!

thanks for reading and commenting :) happy valentines day!

evangellie February 14 2011, 14:57:39 UTC

&hearts

I liked that the “You’ll always have me, Changmin-ah. I won’t leave, promise. It’ll just be the two of us.” is followed by "I don’t love you anymore Yunho calmly writes onto the notepad in front of him, his grip in her hair tightening as he pushes the paper towards her, tapping his pen gently against the line he wants her to read aloud." which I think is my favourite line. This succession had just the perfect level of contrast (and creepiness). It's also quite chilling how easy it seems for Yunho to play this double role.

(This wasn't confusing at all btw. :D)

apocryphalic February 15 2011, 00:14:13 UTC

:D whenever i try out a new way of writing, i get so freaked and nervous and frantic that it'll be confusing but i'm relieved to hear it isn't! i wrote this all out of order too and the dates were starting to get to me, lmfao. i was just staring at my huge school calendar going "what the....wait...huh?!" at myself the entire time, dies.

i'm glad it was creepy D: i usually write more...fluffy fics and so when i was told to write a non-fluffy and non-romantic vday fic, i freaked out for a second, lmfao.

relieved it all worked out in the end :D

thanks a lot for reading and for commenting :) i hope you have/had a great valentines day! ♥