What a great addition to the original fic. I really enjoyed the darkness and helplessness in it, I think it fits the mood of where Lee and Kara were. I am so happy that Lee came with Kara to face this with her. I can understand Kara's unwillingness to get attached to the baby but still feel obligated to raise him because he is half hers. And of course Lee just falling for the little guy and doing the right thing because tha's what Zak would have done. I still think Lee would have done the right thing if Zak didn't exist.
Fantastic addition! I hope there is more, I would love to see what happens with the baby and pilots once back with the fleet.
So glad you liked it! Everyone's definitely in such a shitty place in this story. Aside from just the baby aspect (which is so absolutely huge and life altering), we've got Lee and Kara also having to deal with how far they took things on Caprica, as well. It was such a dark fic, and was really fun to write. (and like you, I do think Lee would've done the right thing on his own, anyway!)
I'm definitely going to be writing more! I would have already, but it's been a busy two weeks for me. I finally have some free time, though, so I can start to piece together the next installment from all the ideas I have for it.
I'm so happy to hear that we will see what happens next. No worries about not having it started already. I know all too well RL can really interfere with fandom fun.:)
I agree they are all in such a dark and they do have so much to deal with once they get back. It will interesting to see how they deal with their time on Caprica, the baby and their relationship. Looking forward to it!
This is such a lovely story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! You are a talented writer and your Kara/Lee stories are amongst my favourite ones. Thank you for sharing your works with us and I do hope you decide to continue writing a follow-up chapter to this story. I can see so much potential in this fic! =D
Thanks so much for commenting! Good to know there are people out there still reading some of this.
I started writing the sequel to this and just wasn't feeling it at the time, so it kind of pushed to the side for real life and while I wrote some stuff for another fandom. I do hope to attempt it again soon, though, since I definitely don't think the story ends here.
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Fantastic addition! I hope there is more, I would love to see what happens with the baby and pilots once back with the fleet.
Well done!
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I'm definitely going to be writing more! I would have already, but it's been a busy two weeks for me. I finally have some free time, though, so I can start to piece together the next installment from all the ideas I have for it.
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I agree they are all in such a dark and they do have so much to deal with once they get back. It will interesting to see how they deal with their time on Caprica, the baby and their relationship. Looking forward to it!
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I started writing the sequel to this and just wasn't feeling it at the time, so it kind of pushed to the side for real life and while I wrote some stuff for another fandom. I do hope to attempt it again soon, though, since I definitely don't think the story ends here.
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