Washed Away

[apollosspear]

Title: Washed Away
Pairing: Kara/Lee of course
Prompts: Taking place before "Never Forgotten," Lee is dealing with being all alone on Earth.
Ratted: Teen

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Comments

[cherylad]

This was beautiful, Jason! Heartbreaking, but wonderfully written and a brilliant study into Lee's head.

I love the snippets of Kara talking to him, joining him, comforting him - yet not wrapping it up with a pretty bow and making her re-appear. (not that I don't love pretty bow stories!!) But, taking him through this logical journey that RDM sent him on yet you not having him *completely* alone is worthwhile and enjoyable for Lee fans.

Thank you!

[apollosspear]

Thanks!! i just hated what to him happened in the finally, and what happened to Kara. then one day it popped in my head "What would have happened to Lee?" and i wrote "Never Forgotten" to make myself get an ending I could accept. but the prompts i saw made me think of how he got to that point in "NF," why wouldn't he turn back when he say that cliff? and this was it.

thanks for the review.

[callmeonetrack]

Oh! So lovely and bittersweet. I can believe this, that he would've heard her and felt her and talked to her as he moved on with his journey. Sniff.

[apollosspear]

Thanks so much Tara!!

yeah i think that they could never leave each other. they were so connected that nothing could keep them from each other, not even death. but the way she looked right before the poof it just feels that she would definitely help him when he got too messed up and be there for him.

[cosetteferaud]

This is heartbreaking, but so very lovely. It is a great take on Lee's state of mind after Kara's departure. I love all the bits of Kara talking with him, taking care of him. I can believe it really happening.

“We’ll see each other again Lee, its destiny.”

That's my personal canon. I like to think that they meet again... in the afterlife, in another cycle of time, I dunno... in a place where they finally have the bright shiny future they always deserved. *sniff*

[apollosspear]

thanks!! i think she would have too.

that is my personal cannon too, in fact you should read "Never Forgotten to see where this one ends, oddly enough though i wrote that one first, hmm, anyway i think you will like how it wraps up.

Thanks again!!

[rayruz]

This was very good, very sweet. Like cosette, it's my personal canon, also, that they will always always meet again. And without being all fluffy puppies and rainbows, you put them together in a way where she could still be there, somehow.

[apollosspear]

Thanks!! the biggest thing i hate from the finally was that they ever got to be together. i will never believe that they were stuck on that table. that mess is bull, so i gave them what they deserved.

[rayruz]

Table? What table? I don't even know what you are talking about. La la la la la.

[apollosspear]

lol yeah me either, i guess i shouldn't start drinking this early in the morning huh?

[ecstaticdance]

This is fabulous! I love the way Kara's side of the conversation is made up almost entirely of comments she'd already made during her life. As if they were always hints, keys to understanding her/them. And the description of how Lee feels after his conversation with her is right on. Nothing is fixed, but he's free now, and he's got a life to get on with.

[apollosspear]

Thank you so much!!

Kara always had trouble saying what she meant, or she hid what she felt so i figured she could finally be honest with her soulmate.

And yes Lee needs something to do while he waits to be with her again.