68 - Spirit

May 15, 2006 20:43

Title: We'll be waiting
Author: apostrophe_ess
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JKR, I merely gain from playing these games in her playground.
Pairing/Character: James, Lily (from the other side) and Harry Potter
Word Count: 647
Rating: G
Prompt: For potterverse100, number 68 - spirit. Prompt table here
Summary: In the future James and Lily are willing to do ( Read more... )

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guesswork_ May 15 2006, 14:57:19 UTC
Oh, poor parents. They're innocent of the way Harry was treated by the Dursleys. That's so heartbreaking for parents who loved their son as much as they did.

And you write it so well. Very matter-of-fact but it rings really true. Keep writing! :)

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apostrophe_ess May 20 2006, 13:55:25 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting, and many many apologies it's taken me so long to reply. I've had a busy week of the busiest sort and no time to even think!

I'm glad you liked this. I've often wondered why Harry hasn't come across his parents in a portrait somewhere, if there is one of them of course! Poor Harry.

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xprincessbloomx May 15 2006, 15:18:40 UTC
Oh my goodness that was so incredibly sad. Just the fact that James and Lily are waiting for him to appear near the Mirror of Erised really got me. I think that is one of the more touching parts of the book, to see how much he really misses his parents, and you've captured their POV well.

Great work!

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apostrophe_ess May 20 2006, 13:57:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm sorry I'm so rude and haven't answered your comment until now. I just said to guesswork_ up there ^ that I've had the busiest week ever. I slept more than 12 hours last night, I was so tired.

I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this little story, and that you were touched by the same part of the book that I was and which caused me to write this.

Thank you!

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alex_c_potter May 15 2006, 17:59:35 UTC
Awww, that was incredibly sad and really sweet at the same time. The ending was just perfect. I can't wait to read more, I love you Lily and James ♥

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apostrophe_ess May 20 2006, 13:58:24 UTC
Thank you so much for liking it, reading it, and commenting. I'm so sorry it's taken me so very long to comment back. I've just not had a moment to even think this week. Hopefully everything will be back to normal again now though, and I'll get some more of these stories done.

Thank you again.

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randomneses May 15 2006, 21:34:35 UTC
All your stories really move me...this one is no exception!

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apostrophe_ess May 20 2006, 14:01:59 UTC
Aww, thank you. I have to admit to having a tear or two sometimes when writing them.

I'm so sorry that I've taken such a long time to reply to your comment. It's been one hell of a week, and it's only now I can actually get anywhere near coherent thought!

Thank you again.

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chocolate_limes May 17 2006, 10:56:49 UTC
Awww, it's sweet to think of them swirling around Hogwarts hoping to get a glimpse of Harry as he grows up! *hugs them*

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apostrophe_ess May 20 2006, 14:02:52 UTC
Imagine if they are there, but always a floor, or a corridor, or even a painting too far ahead, or behind him. All this time and they've never actually caught up to see him!

Poor Harry.

Thank you!

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