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[apostrophe_ess]

Title: In love and in lust
Author: apostrophe_ess
Disclaimer: Everything belongs to JKR, I merely gain from playing these games in her playground.
Pairing/Character: Mainly James, but also Lily and Harry
Word Count: 748
Rating: G - yes really, despite the title!
Prompt: For potterverse100, number 9 - Love. Prompt table here. Chronological list here.
Summary: As

Comments

[traceria]

You really caught the wonder in it all with how you wrote his thoughts. They're all in these short little phrases with simple, everyday words because you can't necessarily think 'elaborately' when your in a state of amazement like that.

Those last few lines are the kicker, they are. *sniff*

And I loved the opener, too: He hadn’t fainted. That was good. He he...

[apostrophe_ess]

What a lovely thoughtful comment. Thank you. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to be able to reply. I wonder if James squealed when Harry was born too! Awww, bless him.

Thank you again.

[vanillacocktail]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute!!!

How adorable. It makes me realise though, the way you write James that he wasn't all immaturity and jokes. Its definately not a bad thing though.

[apostrophe_ess]

*grin* Thank you! I'm glad that you like it, and that you like the way James is turning out.

[nixxy_]

aww that was so sweet, i have tears in my eyes *reaches for the tissues*

[apostrophe_ess]

Awwww *offers you a handy* Thank you so much for commenting, even if I did bring tears to your eyes. Thank you also for having the tears, I'm very pleased (and not really guilty at all) to hear it.

Thank you!

[apostrophe_ess]

That was of course a hanky and not a handy, though you are welcome to have one of those too if you like!

Thank you again.