Comments | apparentlycute: pyatt/bissonnette, "if the green left the grass"

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pyatt/bissonnette, "if the green left the grass"

Jul 03, 2012 20:38

Title: If the green left the grass
Fandom: Coyotes RPS
Pairing: Taylor/Biz
Rating: eh... R for language?
Words: 1206
Summary: You’re a dick, Biz texts, and then storms around his apartment, fuming. It’s not the most immature thing he’s ever done, but it’s easily the douchiest thing he’s ever done to Taylor, and in some part of him, deep down, the guilt ( Read more... )

rating: r, pairing: pyatt/bissonnette, fandom: hockey rps, genre: drama, words: 1000-4999

Comments 12

psharp10 July 4 2012, 03:35:09 UTC

Wonderful. Love this <3...continuing this, right? :)

withcrayons July 4 2012, 03:40:21 UTC

Yeah, I'm a sucker for a happy ending ;) so I'll definitely write a sequel of some sorts. Thanks so much for reading!

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withcrayons July 4 2012, 20:53:00 UTC

Aw, thanks so much for the compliment! I was so bummed out when I heard about the trade; so I had to get all my feels out via Biz, haha.

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withcrayons July 6 2012, 00:46:31 UTC

Oh lord, I think I would legitimately die. The year before last when fucking goddamn Vancouver scored that OT goal in round 1 in game 7 to knock Chicago out of the playoffs, I wrote out SO MANY FEELS and I probably even cried. :|

Oh gosh, thank you so much! I post all of my fic here, so if any of the pairings on the side interest you, you're welcome to take a look, or watch the comm. Thanks again. :)

ladds July 4 2012, 07:17:12 UTC

all the break-up fics bc of the past two days sobs

so i really like your pyatt :'D

withcrayons July 4 2012, 20:54:11 UTC

UGH I KNOW. HOCKEY WHY YOU SO DEPRESSING. :(((

Oh man, that means a LOT to me to hear, thank you! It's super difficult to get him down in a way that's satisfying to me, since he's so quiet and with his past and all, I have a hard time writing him, but Biz comes easy to me, so I guess it balances out. Thanks so much for the comment!

froodiest July 4 2012, 13:12:09 UTC

I LOVE THIS AND THEM.

Ugh, why so life ruining, free agency. I'm going to bookmark all your taylor/biz right now so I can console myself.

Also, I love Doan's cameo in this. Way to be, Captain. Way to be.

withcrayons July 4 2012, 20:56:22 UTC

FREE AGENCY SUCKS AND I HATE IT.

Bookmark... all one of it? Actually, I have a fic that's a few scenes shy of being completed sitting in my docs folder. Like I said, it's got an ending but it's not completed, but if you want, it's a lot happier at the end and I can send it to you if you want? I really could use some feedback on it, actually.

If you're looking for really good Taylor/Biz fic, juliella writes fantastic stuff.

I needed a rock of logic and irritation for Biz in this, so Doaner it was! :P Thanks so much for reading, lovey!

raspsun July 5 2012, 14:26:00 UTC

You know I love your Biz! I like your Taylor, too, but your Biz, ugh, I LOVE him.

"Not talking."
&hearts

withcrayons July 6 2012, 00:42:16 UTC

You are so lovely. ♥ I should probably be embarrassed at how easily it is to write from Biz!POV, but *shrug*, I give no fucks.

Glad you enjoyed it. :)