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Fic - Dear Caitlyn

Apr 01, 2013 12:55

Title: Dear Caitlyn (1/5)
Author: appassionata1
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,589
Characters: Luke, Noah, Holden. Lily, Original Male Characters, Original Female Character (Emma and Charlene Mentioned)
Warnings: Character Death, OOC, Strong Language
Beta: valenti1965
Artwork: appassionata1
Summary: How can someone you barely know have such a profound impact on your life? Junior High ( Read more... )

nukeminibang2013, fanfiction

Comments 16

valenti1965 April 1 2013, 20:15:19 UTC

Oh Faye I already feel so sorry for that poor child whose died and the awful spun that was made of eraser at school. So young yet Noah still picked up on how like was feeling.

appassionata1 April 3 2013, 21:21:28 UTC

I think one way or another these are experiences we've all had in our lives. It helps having someone you're close with to help you get through them. Thanks Lou.

123cariad April 1 2013, 20:52:38 UTC

AAAWW poor Caitlyn I feeling so many emotions in this first chapter Faye ... great start of for more x

appassionata1 April 3 2013, 21:23:49 UTC

Thanks, with this story I was hoping to stir up my reader's emotions :) So glad you like it.

wheelie47 April 1 2013, 21:11:15 UTC

Poor Caitlyn. Such an emotive subject.

Even though both boys didn't know her very well. I'm not surprised that her death affected them so much or that they came to her aid in her first place. That's the kind of guys they are.

appassionata1 April 3 2013, 21:27:19 UTC

It's kind of strange that it happens to us. I guess it makes us examine our own mortality. It's rare that 12 year olds ever do. Thanks for your review :)

jb1183 April 2 2013, 05:12:20 UTC

Faye, you're doing such a beautiful job here. Even though it's AU and Luke and Noah are young innocent 12 year old best friends, they still feel so much like the characters we know so well. That's some incredible talent on your part!

appassionata1 April 3 2013, 21:57:00 UTC

Thanks so much Jim. I like thinking of them in AU situations. I enjoyed writing them at this age.

sarahsezlove April 2 2013, 09:32:56 UTC

The excitement of the kids leaving school was so beautifully contrasted with sadness of loss.

A wonderful start.

appassionata1 April 3 2013, 21:29:21 UTC

The boys are trying their best to just be kids, but sometimes events can make you grow up fast. Thanks for your review :)