Proceed With Caution

[appassionata1]

Title: Proceed With Caution (1/6)
Author: appassionata1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count:3,240 (chapter 1)
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are property of CBS and Telenext Media. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: When sixteen year old Luke Grimaldi goes missing while on a ski trip with friends, a top secret organization lead by Noah Mayer

Comments

[123cariad]

Fabulous start Faye xx completely hooked x just a little query how old is Noah going to be in your story

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much. So glad you're hooked. I've decided to leave it up to the reader to determine Noah's actual age. There is a May/December element to the story. I so love May/December romances. I wonder if that's an M/M genre.

[valenti1965]

Great and intriguing start Faye! Post more very very soon!!!

[appassionata1]

Thanks. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter is on its way :)

[scj0710]

What a great beginning to "Proceed With Caution", Faye! Really enjoy all the characters and the dramatic, mysterious scenario. Noah as an action man always works for me (plus I really love the cooking and the languages and……everything!). Really look forward to more as Luke and Noah come face-to-face and the story unfolds….

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much. There's a lot more mystery to come and a few surprises along the way. I love writing Noah as a tough guy. I'm glad you're enjoying my version of him.

[jb1183]

Faye, I'm sorry I'm so late to the party on this great story! But the good news is I get instant gratification on Chapter 2! This is very exciting start! I love the atmosphere of mystery and I'm always intrigued when there is an age difference between Luke and Noah. I always appreciate the opportunity to loathe Damian, but I definitely love when Winston is a good guy, so I'm thrilled to see that here.

You are one of the VERY BEST Nuke authors, in my humble opinion, and I can tell you've given us another winner!

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much Jim I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. I believe that you're one of the very best Nuke authors as well. In later chapters you'll have more Damian to loathe and more Winston to love plus a little romance :)