Proceed With Caution

[appassionata1]

Title: Proceed With Caution (2/6)
Author: appassionata1
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Word Count: 2,945 (chapter 2)
Disclaimer: ATWT characters are property of CBS and Telenext Media. No copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: When sixteen year old Luke Grimaldi goes missing while on a ski trip with friends, a top secret organization lead by Noah Mayer

Comments

[scj0710]

Whew, Faye! I’d sure like to have a word or two with Kevin - it wouldn’t be pleasant for him…that’s for sure! Maddie didn’t make wise decisions…thank goodness Noah is there to help! I am totally spellbound by Noah and the way he gets right down to business - he does not mess around! Now - go save Luke, Noah! I have the feeling Luke will be spellbound, too! :-)

[appassionata1]

Thanks so much for your review. I'm so glad that you like my OOC version of Noah. I love to put him in different situations and to give him different personalities and professions. My tough guy Noah seems to be very popular :)

[jb1183]

I find pretty much all versions of Noah hot, but your version of Noah here is sexy as hell! This was a possible side of Noah that Jake didn't get to play, but that he would have excelled at for sure!

This version of Maddie is not particularly bright, because although I don't feel even slightly sorry for Kevin, she wasted a lot of precious time by not telling Noah the truth right away that would have been better spent attending to Luke's needs.

I see in one of your comment responses that Chapter 3 is on the way, and I'm excited to see where this is going next! Loving it, Faye!

[appassionata1]

I'm having a blast writing this version of Noah. Maddie is a bit of a ditzy spoiled rich girl here, but she does care for Luke. I hope you like how Luke and Noah meet. It was one of my favorite scenes to write :) Coming in the next chapter.