Star Trek XI: Tender is the touch

Nov 18, 2010 15:14

Title: Tender is the Touch
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine. :(
Warnings: Plot? WHAT. PLOT. With a dash of H/C as a thinly veiled cover.

Summary: Quick + dirty comment pr0n for jim_and_bones (viewable here), which provided some very... inspirational prompts.

'Suck,' Jim said calmly, no room for argument in the cool, almost calculating blue of his eyes. )

rating:nc-17, pair: kirk/mccoy, fic:startrek

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rubynye November 18 2010, 21:37:34 UTC
This deserves a MUCH longer comment than "ooh, *yes*," but I'm rushing, so that will have to do.

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appelwagon November 21 2010, 06:33:48 UTC
and it does do! Thank you for your kind words <3

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checkerboxed November 18 2010, 21:38:36 UTC
i've always been curious about jim's reaction to failing the first two times he took the kobayashi maru, and this is a wonderful look into that. i loved how attuned bones was to what jim needed.

also, jim riding bones is seriously hot. this fandom needs MOAR!

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appelwagon November 21 2010, 06:35:31 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you : )

(and. TRUER WORDS! Vive la revolution cowgirl!Jim)

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thistlerose November 18 2010, 22:07:24 UTC
Unf. This is gorgeous. And I love the undercurrent of need and anxiety.

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appelwagon November 21 2010, 06:35:53 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. <3

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sangueuk November 18 2010, 22:09:26 UTC
I really liked this. I loved the backstory, the understanding between the two of them, and I can't help thinking that Jim 'silencing' Bones with his fingers is kind of symbolic. Also, seriously hot - yummy!

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appelwagon November 21 2010, 06:36:59 UTC
Oh man, I wish I had that much forethought! (mostly I just think it's hot. shhh, don't tell!) But yes, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. <3

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spikeface November 18 2010, 22:31:17 UTC
I really love how the need for reassurance and the need for control are so entwined in Jim here, how Bones is so willing to give Jim whatever he needs. And it was reeaaalllly hot, too.

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appelwagon November 21 2010, 06:38:57 UTC
Yes! You sum up what I love about the Jim/Bones dynamic really neatly. And thank you for your kind words! <3

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