OC APPLICATIONS THREAD

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OC APPLICATION THREAD

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[INSTRUCTIONS];

Applications open 11:59 P.M. Sunday night, Eastern Standard Time. They will be open for submission purposes until 11:59 p.m. of the immediately following Sunday.

First time applicant? GO HERE and familiarize yourself with our rules, suggestions

Comments

Re: Application for RP--3rd person RP

[tastemytaint]

Next time I'm in hell, I will most definitely recommend this city's decorator. Thought Vinseth with an ironic half-smile. Hell could use the downgrade

[berryfloss]

Unfortunately the extra sample provided tells us nothing further about the character, and merely shows action and reaction to awakening in the City. The mixture of first person and third person with nothing to separate the two borders on confusing, and the lack of true paragraph breaks makes it slightly difficult to read. Feel free to submit a new application during the next application week, and just as free to inquire a mod [messenger contact preferably] as to the reasons behind the rejection.