Comments | applecede: HURRAH! and "All The Right Curves"

applecede

HURRAH! and "All The Right Curves"

Jan 20, 2005 17:48

corvidae9 wrote me "A Pithy Cliché About Opposites" for the dearsanta fic exchange. If you want clever fluff and awesome dialogue in a Draco/Ginny ficlet, then you'll want to read that one :) Thank you, corvidae9!

Finally, my gift fic to morganmuffle at dearsanta. She asked for Draco/Pansy, so here it is ( Read more... )

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A smashed Draco Malfoy was still a Malfoy... and still delicious. pardonthelitany January 20 2005, 02:15:07 UTC

i believe your summary was perfect*

i cannot believe i am up at this hour, but i am very glad i am. this is lovely. i dont read Draco/Pans, mainly b/c i have never read a Pansy i like. but this was well worth my time.

In those deep hours of the night, there was no distinction, no lines, no anything. Everything was blurred, made just a little fuzzy by the shadows. this is so beautiful

But at night, she still fit perfectly along his lean frame. Angles and pointed contours melded into softness that molded to his Seeker’s body. She marveled at it. She couldn’t find a reason for it. Perhaps it was because they had been doing this for so long, her body had grown to align itself neatly with his. It was nothing natural or fateful, it was simply habit.

No, she couldn’t have imagined this closeness, this intimacy.

like a soft note of a lingering scent, ready to dissipate. so pretty. reminds me of a single clamor of a piano key in a pitch black room ( ... )

Re: A smashed Draco Malfoy was still a Malfoy... and still delicious. applecede January 22 2005, 03:46:01 UTC

I still like your summaries better, but thank you :)

Thank you, once again, for your thorough feedback. <3 And dude, I LOVE reminds me of a single clamor of a piano key in a pitch black room - that is SUCH gorgeous imagery, which you're really quite good at, so I'm not that surprised. But still. Way to catch me off guard. <3

I hope you survived the morning :)

Re: A smashed Draco Malfoy was still a Malfoy... and still delicious. pardonthelitany January 22 2005, 09:41:01 UTC

*ego swelling* oh, thanks!

i did survive the mornig, barely. but i slept though bio to make up for it. :D i didnt miss much.

bloodysweet January 20 2005, 09:23:42 UTC

And whenever he would say, “…straight on till morning,” he would pull her close, tucking her head beneath his chin, and then the world would simply fall away for a while.

ahhhh so pretty T-T I've been super busy so I haven't been able to read D/G lately.. and this is a moment of ... um beauty? calm? I want to cry because it's so beautiful? Or all of the above =) haha;; okay obviously I haven't gotten enough sleep.

Your writing is beautiful and talented like always. <3 this muchly~

applecede January 22 2005, 03:47:29 UTC

Heya :) Aww, I'm sorry to hear you're really busy. Well, unless you like being busy. Some people like being busy. Okay, so I hope you've been happy even though you've been busy. I am SO rambling.

Thanks for taking the time to read it and leave feedback though :)

bubbleforest January 20 2005, 11:58:15 UTC

This has such a smooth, calm and serene flow to it that I wanna cry. God. That just made my knees wobble. The way you describe the odd shapes and angles and Draco's changing physique is stunning. I remember reading part of this on GJ! I was flabbergasted back then as well. Damn you, how am I supposed to leave coherent feedback to stuff like this?

I will say this though. You inspire me. Completely and utterly. I'm gonna go write something now, because damnit if that story just didn't just get me in the writing mood. Draco/Pansy YAY!!1! Leila DOUBLE YAY!11!

Also, drunk!Draco? Yes. A thousand times yes. Boy should be lickered up more often. *coughididntjustsaythatcough*

streetscribbles January 20 2005, 17:22:42 UTC

LICKered up? LMFAO. *liquered up, maybe?

FREUDIAN SLIP!1!!!!!1!! The fangirl LIVES ON!

bubbleforest January 20 2005, 17:49:44 UTC

...no no, that was totally deliberate. Totally! What are you talking about, Freudian slip? NUH-UH!11!!!

stupid americans having words that sounds different from what they're spelled.

applecede January 21 2005, 05:04:07 UTC

YES! SO glad you updated Scrawled Napkins. And dude - not even touching the HP one yet, but about the Nick/Paris continuation - METTE. It's been WAY too freaking long since I read your writing. What I love a lot about SN is that I get all these small dosages of talent that just promises so much more, you know?

If you wanted a scandal, rebuked his friends, you could've stayed with him and been happy.

PERFECT transition, dude, and says so much at the same time. (I'm doing feedbacking here since I didn't want to disrupt the round robin in the comment.)

Anyway - I'm very glad that this inspired you, for my own benefit, naturally ;) Thank you, though, I'm pretty proud of this one.

(BTW. Betty and I had a long discussion about the HP drabble you left up ;))

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wendybird7 January 21 2005, 00:29:21 UTC

I think this is one of your best. You really made me look twice at Pansy and her motives. You made her sound beautiful.

By the way, Kelly Clarkson IS cool :))

applecede January 22 2005, 02:30:38 UTC

YEAH SHE IS. OMG. I'm so into girl pop songs all of a sudden.

Thanks :) Maya's Those of Great Ambition really helped me change the way I look at Pansy.

hoot2 January 21 2005, 01:12:11 UTC

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i am speechless....what they said already up there i guess, this was really good.my first pansy fic i read. i relaly liked it especially the peter pan quotes..heh my favorite movie *_*