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After Sex

Mar 07, 2006 19:55

Title: "After Sex"
Ship: Draco/Ginny
Rating: R
Summary: Exactly what the title says. A little conversation post-sex.
A/N: Oh my god, my first Draco/Ginny in a LONG fucking time. 498 words, small ficlet with no plot. Best I could do *weeps* I've got that longer D/G fic, it's about 5000 words right now, and will probably be posted in 3 or 5 parts. ( Read more... )

draco/ginny, fic

Comments 11

bk11 March 7 2006, 11:38:53 UTC

Aw, I liked this, Leila!

It was nice and light, and I like how cute they were just talking about her hexing him. She's got at-ti-tude for reals. And that makes her a good match for him. And I like how this came from Draco's pov--it shows another side of him. I especially liked this line:

"She looked the very picture of a girl thoroughly loved"

And secret trysts? HOT.

applecede March 8 2006, 08:33:40 UTC

Hi Stacy! Thanks Stacy! But aw man, I can't believe you read this one! Not that I'm not proud of D/G, just not this one!

And I definitely think, like, canonically speaking, Ginny would have a lot of pull over Draco :)

But thanks a lot for reading it anyway :D :D

bk11 March 8 2006, 12:37:51 UTC

hahaha, don't be silly. I still got a lot of stuff from your writing here. But I know how you feel, there are a lot of stuff that I swept under the carpet and am like--uh--don't read this...

And Ginny having pull over Draco makes more sense than Draco have pull over ANYONE. Haha. ;) Boy's a follower.

You're welcome anyways!

elle_blessing March 7 2006, 12:15:20 UTC

Mmmmm...lazily sprawled Draco. yum. It's nice to see D/G from you again :) Don't push yourself though, otherwise it's no fun to write them...and Draco should always be fun to do, I mean write ;)

♥♥♥

applecede March 8 2006, 08:54:41 UTC

Thank you very much! :D :D And you're right, Draco is fun to write. I've just been seeing writing as a sort of discipline lately and feeling guilty that I haven't written the OTP in a while :P

ryuugazaki March 7 2006, 13:04:52 UTC

Welcome back! Fantastic ;)

applecede March 8 2006, 08:55:03 UTC

THANK YOU! :D :D

misconstrue May 18 2006, 17:33:05 UTC

this is so sweet. I love how you've lingered on the little sentimental details while still reminding us of how hush-hush this has got to be.

applecede May 18 2006, 17:48:23 UTC

Hi! I have no idea how you found this, but thank you very much for your feedback on this short ficlet :)

misconstrue May 18 2006, 18:32:34 UTC

Through bk11. :) I think I'm done spamming you for the day. I really should be off doing school work. *glares at it*

applecede May 18 2006, 19:44:53 UTC

LOL :D Well, thank you so much for taking the time to feedback! I was blown away when I just checked my inbox ;) Good luck with your school work! I'm on the semester system, so I got out early and everyone's still in school *sheepish*