Fic: "Naked-Eye Viewing"

[applecede]

Title: Naked-Eye Viewing
Ship: Draco/Ginny
Rating: R
Summary: Draco tries his hand at seeing the future.
A/N: How can I possibly write Draco/Ginny when I haven't, really, seriously, for months? Apparently, late nights and The Fader's "No Sleep 2Nite" will do it. Feedback is LOVE!

Comments

[jandjsalmon]

Oh wow! this was fab! I particularly loved the description of how little boys raised to believe they could have anything behaved... too true about Draco being a third category!

This is so fab I feel I must friend you! ;) (if that's okay?) I was going to ask during the dgficexchange but I never thought about it.... do you mind?

[applecede]

Thank you very much! :P For reading and the kind feedback! It's now 7:30 my end, so I'm starting my day on a great note :D

I don't mind at all! *friends back*

[greyskygirl]

Ahh, Leila. It's lovely, and it's sad, and there are a thousand reasons why I love it.

[applecede]

Kerry, thank you. It's always great to get feedback from you <3

btw, my progress on the Sarkney is still like...complete, but not. Working on it! This fic came out of nowhere. :P

[greyskygirl]

Hey, no complaints on this end. I can hardly fuss about your Sarkney not being done when a) mine isn't either and b) you're giving me stuff like this (of course, 'cause this was ALL FOR ME) to tide me over.

[applecede]

:D Oh, but trust me. I'm doing my best to clean up the Sarkney in hopes of adding a little pressure. It's all a very selfish thing! Sarkney + Sarkney just - there's no BAD thing in that.

[toothpick349]

Wow. This was really good, hun. I love it. I can't pinpoint the reason why, but I do.

But honestly, stop thinking about the dog and GET TO SLEEP!

[applecede]

Thank you! I went to sleep right after I posted it, got SLAUGHTERED in tennis this morning. I was sooo rusty and I think maybe half asleep. Still can't wait for the dog :D

[applecede]

Thank you, Keres! Especially for your kind words on Ginny, cuz I don't know, I like Ginny as a strong female character, and Draco IS weak, but I don't see him as always giving in to Ginny and not taking the lead himself because Ginny's just such a spitfire who can kick *everyone's* ass. So THANKS :D This is just a one-shot, it just came from the "I'm not someone you can use to sleep at night" line, and I thought it would only be a drabble, but it wrapped itself into a one-shot. Also, I want so badly to write EiL! The next chapter is maybe...1/5 done, and I know I'm taking ages...but it's a fic I intend to finish, anyway.

Yeah, I do! I've played since I was...8 I think, but since I turned 12 it's been REALLY on and off, like a summer every two years or something. And WHOA! That is HARDCORE. I'm so in awe and have so much admiration for you! I love tennis - watching it, playing it, but the way I've played, I could only do it for leisure, which is all good :)

California weather is awesome, and I love, love it. Other places, when they'

[applecede]

I totally see what you mean. There were times before when I rushed chapters, but with EiL I've been playing it safe, maybe too safe to the point of deleting a bunch of paragraphs and starting over. I like the story though, and it was a huge exercise in fluff and humor, so I intend to finish it for those reasons, and ALSO because I've met a lot of great people because of it. I'm really glad to hear you say that, though, I can't deny it doesn't soothe my conscience loads :)

And thank you! Thanks very much for your EiL review! Cuz I fretted a lot over what reason Ginny would want to leave Draco, how to make it you know, plausiable! Also, since I got a taste of it, I like break-up and then back together again fics a lot :D

[only_for_one]

Really good, loved the descriptions!

[applecede]

Thank you very much :D