We might fall fast. We might fall hard (5/?) Part 2/2

[appleswithin]

“I can do this.” Rachel said rolling back her eyes so that only the whites could be seen. She heard Quinn say “Ew” then she closed her eyelids before focusing back on the girl, who was pulling a face that looked a bit like Beaker from the Muppets. They were sitting on the stage eating their lunch and had ended up having a conversation about all the

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[4guiltypleasure]

Here you go, saving my Sunday night with your fic ♥

Now lemme just print this chapter and be happy reading it :D

[appleswithin]

Ah thanks. Quinn mark III is turning out to be pretty awesome :)

The cheese and chocolate sandwiches came from my friend when she was pregnant, I thought it was disgusting too!

[4guiltypleasure]

Annnnd I'm back to comment in a tl;dr manner...

When she looked, she saw that the blonde had that odd surprised-amused look again. <-- Charlie was back, wasn't he? I can't blame Quinn, tho', your Rachel seem to have this magical ability to say double meaning phrases without even noticing

[appleswithin]

The first 1000 words of this ch are all your fault :)

I really didn't write Rachel as sad in ch4 but then i re-read it, and she did seem that way so i felt the need to rectify.

I'm making you my advisor!

Anywho, yes Charlie was back and very intersted in Rachel's fingers :D

I wasn't sure if Quinn's Charlie facial expression was too subtle, but I couldn't bring myself to make it glaringly obvious either, and I've already thought of about another million things for Quinn to say "the baby made me do it" as an excuse.

[4guiltypleasure]

Ohhh I feel so important and happy right now ♥ I'll start to always comment on my impressions if that will help you :D

Not only Charlie, but I'm interested in Rachel's fingers lol and I'm wondering if she'll start to be aware of her magical double meaning powers, because teaser!Rachel is as yummy to see as dorky!Rachel

It sounded (read? well, again, my impression while reading this chapter) that Quinn's expression was pretty close to her usual expression onscreen when Rachel starts to babble like a crazy hyperactive girl on redbull... You know something close to my icon right now. That's how I imagine her with Charlie on her shoulder...

Btw, I'm starting to think that you are Charlie! lol

[appleswithin]

The way I write and the way people read it aren't necessarily the same, so, commment away!

The thing with Rachel's weird fingers is actually something I can do, I showed someone this once and she had pretty much the same reaction as Quinn. It amused the hell out of me :)

I'm almost certain I'm not Charlie, and your icon is close her her Charlie look, just add a dirty smile and that'd be it.

[let_me_stop]

I can't wait for more of this. It makes me laugh so much, I smile a fair bit as well xD

[appleswithin]

I'm happy you enjoy :)

[newbie_2u]

Such fun, and I really loved Quinn's explanation for her new attitude toward Rachel. It was succinct and completely plausible. Nicely done! Can't wait for more Charlie moments.

[appleswithin]

Well thank you. And I'm sure Charlie is here to stay now!