Comments | appleswithin: We might fall fast. We might fall hard (8/?) 2/2

appleswithin

We might fall fast. We might fall hard (8/?) 2/2

Oct 17, 2010 12:35

Once the four girls had eaten, Santana led them to the large ball pit in the fast food place on the outskirts of the mall and if Quinn didn’t know better, she’d think that the Latina was actually excited for what was about to happen. The three friends all had to go through the initiation, it wasn’t dangerous and now as sixteen year olds it was ( Read more... )

rachel/quinn

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mjacton October 17 2010, 16:54:34 UTC

Finally! Quinn needs to get in gear and tell Rachel now.

Great chapter! Sorry about your computer, but it was totally worth the wait!

I have to admit, I used to like Finn, but now that he and Rachel are actually together, I see all the things Santana said are true. I liked that speech.

appleswithin October 17 2010, 17:21:13 UTC

Yes, my computer caused me some annoyance. It's never fun having to re-write 2000 words of a chapter, but glad you thought it was worth the wait :D

I've never liked Finn, Santana's speech was probably the easiest and quickest thing I've written.

mjacton November 29 2010, 03:22:59 UTC

Any chance you might continue this?

appleswithin November 29 2010, 13:31:23 UTC

Sorry, life has been a bit crazy recently. I'm about 3/4 of the way through this chapter and trying hard to get it finished.

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freshtilapia October 17 2010, 17:07:33 UTC

Santana FTW! I love how she made Quinn realize she's crushing on Rachel. Really love that convo :)

And hello, Charlie! Glad to have him back (okay, and you, too ;)

appleswithin October 17 2010, 17:22:21 UTC

Well thank you so much :)

Charlie is glad to be back (and so am I!)

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appleswithin October 18 2010, 22:33:50 UTC

Thank you!

I loved writing the Finn speech :)

spu_nk October 17 2010, 18:51:18 UTC

Yay a new chapter :) I loved it !
Santana FTW. And the fact that rach finally found friends is awesome.I wish it could be like this on the show. Rach deserves it. (and not Finn :P)

I can't wait to see how the relationship between quinn and Rachel will evolve. (Moar moar moar !!! )

appleswithin October 18 2010, 22:36:37 UTC

Thanks!

I agree, Rachel deserves some friends (And no Finn included) :)

4guiltypleasure October 17 2010, 22:19:47 UTC

OMG YAY!! :DDD

That pretty much sums up my feelings right now. I'm all happy and stuff about friendship and whatever, but Quinn finally realizing her feelings? That makes me SO happy *dances around* now Charlie will have more freedom to reign over those hormones. Go Charlie, gogo! Let's see how much Quinn can hold on before jumping for the kill!

In my head, Quinn will look at Jesse when he's all possessive and cranky and she'll say: "Oh, it's on, bitch!"

And I like the way Santanna is all "I support your gayness, see? I'm trashing Finn and Jesse, maybe Stubbles will see how hot for her you are and you'll make babies and shit so I can make all the lesbian jokes I want in the near-future" ♥

Thanks for the chapter :D

appleswithin October 18 2010, 22:53:48 UTC

Well it's about time I got around to starting the Faberry-ness. This chapter included, I'm on over 35,000 words!

I do want to have a Quinn/Jesse face off at some point, but probably not for a few chapters. For now maybe just hormonal protective Quinn. That could be fun :D