Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the POV. And I wanted to keep the oddness of their conversation from the original without copying it entirely, so I'm very happy to hear that you liked it!
It's awesome of you to read and comment. I appreciate it. <333
HAHAHA. OH DEAR THIS WAS ADORABLE. I was literally reading it with my face like this: 8D Loved Jared's TOTAL INDIGNATION at the thought of people touching his eyes and his creepy-person ways of getting people away from the empty chair. Loved Jensen's equally creepy knowledgeable foreskin comeback. THEY'RE MEANT TO BE.
I'm so sorry that I took your sweet, adorable Jared and made him grumpy! But I was very relieved that you didn't hate this. I absolutely loved the way you brought them together in such an ordinary setting, which is why I chose this story to remix. I didn't intend to strip away that sweetness, because it was one of the things I loved the most about your story, but I'm so happy to hear that you liked what I added, Jared's eye touching issues and his creative chair defense. And yes: CLEARLY, they are meant to be! *g*
Thanks so much for giving me such a fun story to play with! <3
Duuuuude. Yes. Yes to the creepy and awful atmosphere of all offices of optometry, yes to Jared's creative method of keeping the chair next to him empty, yes to the running commentary in Jared's head, a wonderful and scary place, yes to the awkward yet funny, awesome insta-connection between the boys, and a world of yes to the final paragraph. You are awesome.
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Thanks so much for giving me such a fun story to play with! <3
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