20/20 [Jared/Jensen, PG]

Oct 15, 2009 20:56

For j2_remix I turned wanttobeatree's lovely The Incredibly Ordinary Adventure of Jared and Jensen into something for which I must apologize: opticians and optometrists of the world, I'm sorry. I do not hate you ( Read more... )

supernatural fic: remix, supernatural fic: jared/jensen, supernatural fic, supernatural fic: rps, supernatural fic: 2009, supernatural fic: au

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apreludetoanend October 28 2009, 21:36:40 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked the POV. And I wanted to keep the oddness of their conversation from the original without copying it entirely, so I'm very happy to hear that you liked it!

It's awesome of you to read and comment. I appreciate it. <333

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joans23 October 16 2009, 06:47:15 UTC
Now everytime I go for new glasses I'm gonna be thinking about this and grin like a happy fool. Nice! :D

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apreludetoanend October 28 2009, 21:38:06 UTC
Thank you! I loved the original for its ordinary setting, and I guarantee my next eye appointment will be spent thinking of Jensen and Jared too! <3

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wanttobeatree October 16 2009, 12:34:50 UTC
HAHAHA. OH DEAR THIS WAS ADORABLE. I was literally reading it with my face like this: 8D Loved Jared's TOTAL INDIGNATION at the thought of people touching his eyes and his creepy-person ways of getting people away from the empty chair. Loved Jensen's equally creepy knowledgeable foreskin comeback. THEY'RE MEANT TO BE.

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apreludetoanend October 28 2009, 21:50:30 UTC
I'm so sorry that I took your sweet, adorable Jared and made him grumpy! But I was very relieved that you didn't hate this. I absolutely loved the way you brought them together in such an ordinary setting, which is why I chose this story to remix. I didn't intend to strip away that sweetness, because it was one of the things I loved the most about your story, but I'm so happy to hear that you liked what I added, Jared's eye touching issues and his creative chair defense. And yes: CLEARLY, they are meant to be! *g*

Thanks so much for giving me such a fun story to play with! <3

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neros_violin October 16 2009, 22:17:37 UTC
Duuuuude. Yes. Yes to the creepy and awful atmosphere of all offices of optometry, yes to Jared's creative method of keeping the chair next to him empty, yes to the running commentary in Jared's head, a wonderful and scary place, yes to the awkward yet funny, awesome insta-connection between the boys, and a world of yes to the final paragraph. You are awesome.

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apreludetoanend October 29 2009, 00:08:19 UTC
It's so nice of you to read and comment, and I'm very glad you liked this Jared and his quirks. Thank you! <333

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apreludetoanend October 29 2009, 00:08:49 UTC
That's exactly what attracted me to the original. Thank you! =)

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