Low Rising [Jensen/Jared, PG-13]

Dec 30, 2009 22:36

This is my spn_j2_xmas story for ms_soma, who enjoys college AU, romance and schmoop of the not overly-sappy variety, humor, boys being boys, boys trading clothes, and coffee.

Low Rising [Jensen/Jared, PG-13]
Jared does laundry. Jensen overreacts. Danneel makes coffee. Harley has issues.

Jensen's following his shadow, a past tense version of himself. )

supernatural fic: jared/jensen, supernatural fic, supernatural fic: 2009, supernatural fic: au

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beckaandzac December 31 2009, 06:00:09 UTC
I love this. Really kind of a lot. It says so much in so few words, and I basically want to live in it. Beautiful.

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apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 22:36:59 UTC
Thank you! That's such a nice thing to say. I'm so glad you liked it. <3

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the_milky_way December 31 2009, 12:32:03 UTC
This is really beautiful. I love all the emotions in here and the simple way they are just there in a few words.

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apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 22:37:23 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much! =)

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one_2_3_4 December 31 2009, 13:31:00 UTC
So beautiful, absolutely love this. The pace is great and the melancholy feel until the last few paragraphs really tugged. Just dying to get out of a small town, but less than eager to leave behind what makes you whole. Thanks so much for sharing.

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apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 22:38:04 UTC
I'm so glad the sense of melancholy came through! That's so nice to hear, and I'm very glad you liked it. Thank you! <3

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anonymous December 31 2009, 20:56:49 UTC
apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 21:13:50 UTC
And here comes the insanity: Are you still going to like me when I tell you that I screened your comment because the idea of introducing new people to them hurts my heart in a way that I can't even explain? I just want them to be a beautiful, wonderful secret forever and ever. Which I understand is ridiculous, because they're getting fairly well known now, but I just can't help it!

And now I feel ridiculous. More later. It's billing day, and I'm in spreadsheet hell for at least another hour.

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apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 22:35:52 UTC
I don't even know how you manage this level of awesomeness, but KEEP DOING IT. <333 I've been listening to the older stuff all week. I have so much love for them.

Anyway: THANK YOU. This was my working title, and I never intended to keep it, clearly, but then nothing else fit, and how amazing is it that you saw the connection there? And that you saw the way that line set up the rest of the story. I think you're the phenomenal one, and thank you for making me feel like I know what the hell I'm doing. ♥

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macbyrne December 31 2009, 20:58:26 UTC
I really loved this; the way Danneel is the voice of reason, and how they're such boys at the end, discussing their feelings in shorthand, and how Jared knows what's bothering Jensen. Just gorgeous.

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apreludetoanend December 31 2009, 22:39:27 UTC
It's so awesome to hear that their boy-ness came through; thank you! I'm very glad you liked it. <3

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