Low Rising [Jensen/Jared, PG-13]

[apreludetoanend]

This is my spn_j2_xmas story for ms_soma, who enjoys college AU, romance and schmoop of the not overly-sappy variety, humor, boys being boys, boys trading clothes, and coffee.

Low Rising [Jensen/Jared, PG-13]
Jared does laundry. Jensen overreacts. Danneel makes coffee. Harley has issues.

Comments

[tharaist]

I thought this was wonderfully written, and I loved how you portrayed Jensen's fears and hopes!

[apreludetoanend]

I'm so glad you thought so; that's lovely to hear. Thank you! <3

[electricalgwen]

“I don’t forgive you for walking out. And forgetting your phone. And stealing my sweatshirt.”
Jensen puts the mug down on the counter and starts toward Jared. “That’s okay,” he says. “I don’t forgive you for not forgiving me.”
“Just so long as we’re clear,” Jared says, when they meet by the sale table.
He links his index finger with Jensen’s, and Jensen says, “I may have overreacted.”

AWWWWW. So, so lovely. I really felt Jensen's distress, mixed emotions and insecurity. There's a spareness to the writing that conveys the melancholy, the melting snow. I love "past tense version of himself."

[apreludetoanend]

I'm so glad you liked it. That kind of muted, melancholy winter scene is one of my favorite things, and once I started writing it, Jensen just followed. <3

[equally_dour]

Really beautiful! :)

[apreludetoanend]

Thank you! =)

[ruben_c83]

This is so cute, I love it!

[apreludetoanend]

Thanks! =)

[epicallytired]

this was so beautiful i just... i have no words, you used all the good ones.

[apreludetoanend]

That is a much lovelier compliment than I deserve. Thank you.