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aprettykitty
Mia sirena
Jan 24, 2009 12:40
www.miasirena.com
is now up and running. I've listened to everyones comments and it's changed lots.
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knova
January 25 2009, 20:51:42 UTC
Lovely.
I have one suggestion, only because it's a pet peeve of mine. The last light of your home page reads:
"Thank you for looking and best wishes for the best day of your life."
I don't like using the same word twice in a sentence. Maybe change the second "best" to "most beautiful" or something to that effect?
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aprettykitty
February 1 2009, 06:36:29 UTC
Noted - If I remember later I'll change it. I'm not so much with the words but I definitely think you're right. I'd do it now but I have my first hangover in a year!
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I have one suggestion, only because it's a pet peeve of mine. The last light of your home page reads:
"Thank you for looking and best wishes for the best day of your life."
I don't like using the same word twice in a sentence. Maybe change the second "best" to "most beautiful" or something to that effect?
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