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If There's A Rocket Tie Me To It - Chapter Five (Part 2)

Aug 11, 2009 09:50

( If There's A Rocket Tie Me To It - Chapter Five (Part 2) )

bigbang09, character: jared padalecki, character: jensen ackles, fic: rocket, j2

Comments 48

riverbella August 12 2009, 03:01:57 UTC

The description and the title both drew me to this story right away. I love that song with a passion, and it proved an excellent choice for a title on many levels ( ... )

apricot_poodle August 12 2009, 15:16:33 UTC

Yay! I'm glad the song worked for you as well. It really helped form this entire piece of work. Thanks for reading and for your comments, I appreciate them a lot. :)

kruel_angel August 12 2009, 03:41:18 UTC

I was totally enthralled with this story from beginning to end, I just couldn't stop reading! This was great, thanks for sharing.

Oh and there was a place, I think in the 2nd chapter (not sure) where something was supposed to be italic, but it had the < i> things still showing.

apricot_poodle August 12 2009, 15:14:32 UTC

Ooh, I appreciate the html point-out, and thank you so much for reading. :)

alasse August 12 2009, 03:55:31 UTC

This was a really, really great story! I loved the idea of the Craft, how you portrayed and described each of their abilities. The slow build between Jared and Jensen was really, really wonderful, and the mystery of the dream, the clock, it all built up perfectly. I loved this!

apricot_poodle August 12 2009, 15:14:06 UTC

Oh, thank you so much!

norwich36 August 12 2009, 08:07:11 UTC

I really enjoyed this.

apricot_poodle August 12 2009, 15:13:15 UTC

Thank you. :)

lycaness August 12 2009, 09:40:45 UTC

This was awesome. I love how you worked it all, laying a lot of misleading clues as to what was going on with Jensen and what Jared may have done to him.
Poor Jensen, living all that time being controlled and held back, told he was a freak, dangerous, evil and wrong. What a terrible way to go through life, especially coming from the people who are supposed to except you no matter what, support and help you.
Bless Jared, he's such a good person. I loved him agonising over using his craft to invade people, more eager to learn how not to do harm with it that to learn to cool stuff he could do with it, well that's the impression I got.
Chad was just beyond awesome. This much be the most intelligent Chad I've ever read, insightful and intuitive. he knew when he back off but also when to get involved and help. A great character.
I loved this so much, a really brilliant story.
*hugs*

apricot_poodle August 12 2009, 15:21:06 UTC

Awww, thanks for the comment! I would have liked to delve more into what Jared COULD do, but he was just so angsty over ethics! :)