Comments | apricots: new poem

apricots

new poem

Mar 20, 2004 12:40

StatesAfter your tears ( Read more... )

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apricots March 27 2004, 19:25:40 UTC

thaaaaanks, yo! ;)

l0lipopkid March 20 2004, 17:59:00 UTC

omg that is really good. i used to write, but i havent in a while...but usually when i write, i've just gone through a break up, or whatnot so yeah..lol.
but that really is incredible!

apricots March 21 2004, 20:44:08 UTC

it took me a lot of time and practice, so go ahead and write away! :)

quietstar21 March 20 2004, 20:32:07 UTC

i like your poem :)

apricots March 27 2004, 19:27:08 UTC

thank you

slinkstajahlove March 21 2004, 18:43:15 UTC

you said our legacy
is how far
we had come and
should not be judged
on some illusion of forever

i absolutely adored this stanza, as well as the entire poem.
mind if i add you? i saw you on the creativewriting community :)

apricots March 21 2004, 20:45:41 UTC

I'm looking for LJ friends to add ;)

Poem _cursedparadise March 21 2004, 20:03:51 UTC

I like that poem. Very nice!