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nighthawks

Aug 31, 2014 04:36

Title: nighthawks
Author: fiche
Pairing: Jongin/Taemin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Taemin strays, but Jongin always stays. ~1266 words

( At some odd hour in the morning, Jongin jolts himself awake when he bangs his arm rather violently against his bedroom wall, causing it to wobble slightly and a voice right outside the window to mutter, “Shit.” Rearing up from his bed, Jongin squints blearily at the open window and finds a spindly, black-booted leg dangling over its ledge. )

❀ fiche, ✖ exo, ☆ shinee, ✎ fic, ♡ jongin/taemin, ► pg-13

Comments 3

duream September 3 2014, 05:29:46 UTC

This painted a pretty picture of Taemin's roughness, a nice read with really nice imagery. It felt lonely in a way that made me want to read more, with something that would bring them back together. But the piece alone was lovely, I hope you keep writing!

aprilboys September 3 2014, 20:38:42 UTC

Thank you for your lovely comment and for reading!

hiloser04 November 22 2014, 11:15:44 UTC

This was really sad and yet. Still sweet.
I wonder what's the story of Taems downfall.
I feel deeply for Jongin
Reaching for someone who's not there.
And even if they might be physically available to you, the person they once were is lost.
This was really touching.
Thank you for sharing.