this is too long of a comment and mostly sobbing sorry)clio323November 3 2015, 05:32:58 UTC
sorry for the late comment! I actually sat on this story for 2 days because, like I mentioned, I didn't want it to end because I know it will hurt me and I had to build up the courage ^^;;
first off, yep, I totally cried. Baekhyun had asthma when he was human and god damn it, you're so good at building things up (and into the story) that when the big reveal happens, its like a wave crashes on you and all you can do is cry.
I mentioned previously how much I adore your baekhyun and have grown it like your chanyeol, but in this chapter, you gave me a reason to want them to be together. The smut was really well done, but beyond the physical act of it all --- the sheer intimacy and the repercussions, particularly for chanyeol, were everything I needed and wanted to make me want them to be together in the end. Finally, finally, chanyeol understood that he had been wrong about vampires and I liked his development from not trusting vampires to actually wanting baekhyun to bite him (and enjoying it!). The emotional weight of the scene (and
( ... )
RE: this is too long of a comment and mostly sobbing sorry)aprilclashAugust 5 2016, 09:56:17 UTC
ok THIS COMMENT DESERVED AN ANSWER but i'm a terrible person and i'm so bad at handling sns and i really love to talk to my readers but most of the time i have no time and so i find myself a few motnhs later wondering how to reply without sounding rude bc nine fucking months happened and. ok i'm here
( ... )
Oh wow! This was wonderful. The best vampire fic I've ever read. You described all their emotions so well and the world they live in. Wonderful. Thank for sharing this fic with us! I kinda don't want it to end.
Something like this is so extraordinary you just need to read it over and over again. I can't believe such a story exists and such a broken baekhyun exists but his will is strong and his heart is broken and it just pricks you so so so much that who could ever bear to hurt him .
I'm bookmarking this.
A couple years from now I might forget the name of this book but I will forever remember this story
Comments 6
But, DANG, Minseok doesn't mess around!
Reply
first off, yep, I totally cried. Baekhyun had asthma when he was human and god damn it, you're so good at building things up (and into the story) that when the big reveal happens, its like a wave crashes on you and all you can do is cry.
I mentioned previously how much I adore your baekhyun and have grown it like your chanyeol, but in this chapter, you gave me a reason to want them to be together. The smut was really well done, but beyond the physical act of it all --- the sheer intimacy and the repercussions, particularly for chanyeol, were everything I needed and wanted to make me want them to be together in the end. Finally, finally, chanyeol understood that he had been wrong about vampires and I liked his development from not trusting vampires to actually wanting baekhyun to bite him (and enjoying it!). The emotional weight of the scene (and ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Reply
thank you so much for reading!
Reply
I can't believe such a story exists and such a broken baekhyun exists but his will is strong and his heart is broken and it just pricks you so so so much that who could ever bear to hurt him .
I'm bookmarking this.
A couple years from now I might forget the name of this book but I will forever remember this story
Reply
Leave a comment