This entire story made me feel exhilarated! I at first was excited because The Nightmare Before Christmas is my all time favorite movie, then later excited because Sebaek is precious.
I really, really enjoyed the way you wrote Baekhyun when talking about moving to a new country and learning a new language. I could feel the frustration and anxiety of his character at certain points and the flow of his growth against the big bad bully Nathan was climatic and satisfying.
The Fright (extremely clever, btw!) swallowing the bullies up and scaring them in order to save Baekhyun was scary to read for a sec, since Jongin was just fear itself for a moment. Amazing!!
Stupid Simone.
Chanyeol was spooki
Sehun here was a lil brat and it was perfect lol. He was the King of the pumpkin patch! I could see that fitting into this story, since Sehun is tall, bony, and witty. Your characterization makes me amazed and jealous of your talent
Kyungsoo shut up you don't deserve cookies. Lil buttface.
I really enjoyed reading this, though I'm a bit sad about the ending (but seeing it realistically, it's probably the only solution for their situation).
I really liked how you involved the others into Baekhyn's life. It was also very endearing how they took the opportunity to tease the (adorable) brat of a prince.
And how Kyungsoo was so serious for wanting cookies and milk too, just because Yixing got some! (laughs)
To me, this was brilliantly written. It got me reading this even though I'm a big scary cat (but I watched nightmare before Christmas! > ^ <) Every emotion Baekhyun or the other creatures felt was amazingly conveyd. Truly great, thank you for letting us reading this <3
No one knew I was going to end it like this... I didn't know it myself until I wrote it and my roommate read it and she teared up on me. I'm sorry I didn't mean it ;;;;;
Tbh I'm a scaredy cat too, I hate horror movies, but I also love nightmare before Christmas lol
Thank you for your nice words and for reading my fic <3
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thank you for reading <3
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Thank you, I'm happy you liked it!
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This entire story made me feel exhilarated! I at first was excited because The Nightmare Before Christmas is my all time favorite movie, then later excited because Sebaek is precious.
I really, really enjoyed the way you wrote Baekhyun when talking about moving to a new country and learning a new language. I could feel the frustration and anxiety of his character at certain points and the flow of his growth against the big bad bully Nathan was climatic and satisfying.
The Fright (extremely clever, btw!) swallowing the bullies up and scaring them in order to save Baekhyun was scary to read for a sec, since Jongin was just fear itself for a moment. Amazing!!
Stupid Simone.
Chanyeol was spooki
Sehun here was a lil brat and it was perfect lol. He was the King of the pumpkin patch! I could see that fitting into this story, since Sehun is tall, bony, and witty. Your characterization makes me amazed and jealous of your talent
Kyungsoo shut up you don't deserve cookies. Lil buttface.
Yixing is a precious boi.
HOLY TAO THAT ONE WAS GOOD IT ( ... )
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I really liked how you involved the others into Baekhyn's life. It was also very endearing how they took the opportunity to tease the (adorable) brat of a prince.
And how Kyungsoo was so serious for wanting cookies and milk too, just because Yixing got some! (laughs)
To me, this was brilliantly written. It got me reading this even though I'm a big scary cat (but I watched nightmare before Christmas! > ^ <) Every emotion Baekhyun or the other creatures felt was amazingly conveyd. Truly great, thank you for letting us reading this <3
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Tbh I'm a scaredy cat too, I hate horror movies, but I also love nightmare before Christmas lol
Thank you for your nice words and for reading my fic <3
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