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Fic: Unexpected - Epilogue

Oct 19, 2011 01:46

Title: Unexpected

Authors: aprilraven and ladydragon76

‘Verse: G1

Series: None

Rating: NC-17

Pairings: Soundwave/Optimus Prime, Starscream/Ratchet

Summary: Relationships can have the strangest beginnings, and become something completely unexpected.

Notes: We both (ladydragon76 and I) wrote responses to different kinkmeme prompts. Both of us received requests to continue in those ( Read more... )

genre: action, warning: disturbing mental images, kink: d/s, smut: sticky, genre: drama, rating: nc-17, warning: character death, warning: non-con, kink: bondage, genre: hurt/comfort, kink: bdsm, character: starscream, genre: angst, character: optimus prime, warning: au, verse: g1, character: ratchet, fanfiction, warning: violence, character: soundwave

Comments 3

velvet_infinity October 19 2011, 10:52:54 UTC

Perhaps a sequel, yes? With more Scree/Ratch??

chai16 November 4 2011, 14:32:22 UTC

Oh wow... well there went last night and most of this morning. And damn what a fine way to have spent it. For something you meant to work in as a primary character study you sure found intricate ways to slip in an enticing plot and riveting action sequences. And I'm not just talking about the epic sex. The moment were Skywarp takes out Megatron had me reeling. And that you played up hw meaningful it was given his status as the most loyal of the seekers made the impact all the more profound even after the fact. Even that this wasn't even the primary climax of the plot worked into smut was brilliant. Shockwave was well played up as both a ninny and legitimate threat. Which worked because you kept the view of him consistent depending on which character's perspective you had me looking through ( ... )

skylar_matthews January 20 2012, 06:59:26 UTC

Cross-commented to show you both some love because, boy, do you both deserve it.

I don't have the words for how awesome the writing was and you definitely make me want to (finally) go check out G1. I do believe this is also my first fic read that deals with actually ending the war and I must applaud you for making it so realistic (in so much as this series can get manage.) Also for taking the time to give some post-war info, as well as integrating the surviving faction members (as well as having them work together to fully end the war,) because both of those made me love it even more.

The pairings were neat too, though I think I most loved Starscream/Ratchet. This series though has most definitely taught me multi-shipping, and it is a very fun feeling.

Happy writing and I can't wait to check out more!