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aprismorae

The difference between dreams and reality

Jul 14, 2013 02:45

Title: the difference between dreams and reality
Rating: pg-13
Genre: angst
Pairing: chen (jongdae) x suho (joonmyun)
Warning: mention of murder
Word count: 875
Summary: In which Jongdae is a man of murder and Joonmyun has a way of saying his name

( When in truth, there was never a cure for the wicked to begin with. )

chen, suho, drabble, suchen, angst

Comments 33

1stepcl0ser August 24 2013, 21:22:25 UTC

wow i love this, i'm creeped out now. jongdae's character is just amazing and the last thing he says is just... Ugh goosebumps!!

aprismorae October 10 2013, 22:47:03 UTC

sorry for the late response, but thank you!

shanghaigirl01 October 10 2013, 21:29:40 UTC

beautiful and creepy and deliciously concise. part of me wanted more bc greedy, but i feel like the effect would've been lost, so i'm glad this was a drabble because it suits it perfectly. their character dynamic is just... i love how fucked up jongdae is, and how you're a little subtle about it, and the way that joonmyun tries to be professional about it but it clearly gets to him. you have a way of stating things so they speak volumes.

you are a fantastic writer. that is all.

aprismorae October 10 2013, 22:52:35 UTC

to be honest I wanted to make it longer at first but I felt like the fact that it's short and leaves things out made it stronger in a way, but I'm glad you agree
but wow you analyse in a way that makes one proud, thank you so much for taking the time to write me this comment, I hope you have a wonderful day (:

kaiverrettu May 4 2014, 01:37:59 UTC

Okay so - whoah. This is hauntingly amazing. I don't understand how you can make me feel like this in less than 1000 words. Tbh I don't even know how I feel because somehow, my feelings are all over the place, but what I do know is that this is not how I felt when I opened this fic.

(orz I don't even know what I'm talking about. I love this ok)

snowingseoul October 23 2014, 03:34:49 UTC

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hespify March 15 2015, 17:21:30 UTC

Wow, that was so cool and sad and real at the same time. Thank you!

And how do you feel about translations? May I please translate it into Russian? ^^

aprismorae July 28 2015, 23:24:14 UTC

sorry for the terrible late reply, but I guess I'd be ok with it, if you link back to here and send me a link to the translation? (not that I can read Russian, but I'd still like to see it ^^)

hespify July 30 2015, 17:29:55 UTC

OK and thanks for the permission, late or not hehe. here you go - ficbook(dot)net /readfic /3027206 (you can see the link to the original work there :)

aprismorae July 30 2015, 17:33:22 UTC

thank you! that was fast! and also thank you for finding it interesting enough to translate :)