shaken in my faith: master of illusion - part three
wayyy too much dialogue in this update, for which i apologize, but i swear this story is going somewhere eventually! it won't always be this slow (i think)!
parts one and two here.
( shut up, neph )
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keepgoingkeepgoingkeepgoing.
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But I continue to ADORE this story. And I think it's not only because your writing is amazing and poetic and beautiful but because I find R/J the most difficult couple to write because it's so hard to strike that balance between conflict and attraction, and not only do you manage to pull off that balance, but you explore all of their motivations and reasoning behind it. The constant pull between the political intrigue and personal desire.
The scene in front of the holy fire is amazing. I love how much she's in control in the end, even though it was him who woke her to the possibility of acting however she wishes.
"I swear, Jade, when Kunzite told me you’d sniffed out a Senshi, you’d have thought Endy’s balls just dropped and he was there to see it happen, he was so damn excited. Well. As excited as Kunzite ever gets, anyway,” the other ( ... )
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omg THANK YOU, that is really reassuring, because i really get into potential histories and politics and conflicts and then i wonder if i'm yammering ad nauseam and boring the shit out of people!!
I love how much she's in control in the end
of course she is ;) i see the past shitennou as pretty badass, and probably a little more stereotypically masculine than their modern counterparts would be, the same way endymion's a bamf and mamoru's a little softer. balancing the power play with r/j is a pain in the ass!
BRB DYING RIGHT NOW.
LOL neph is ridic fun to write, he's all like O HELLO LAYDEEZ!!1
hard to gain a sense of his weaker points in a story told from his perspective
this is the primary purpose of him checking in with his boys, so they don't let him sit around and think he's the shit >D
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Please do not apologize for writing an amazing fic. I thank you for writing, posting, and continuing it this far.
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“I’d put good money on him lurking in the Prince’s bedroom a few years ago, just waiting to capture that tender moment.”
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
THAT WHOLE SCENE WITH THE FIRE!!! AND THE TENSION AND THE HOT FIRENESS WITH THE ALMOST KISS BUT MUCH DEEPER THAN THAT THING AND THE BEING CAUGHT BY THE GUARDIAN AND THE 'LEAVE US' HOLY SHIT ASPARA THIS IS SO FUCKING GOOD!! AND THE HUMOUR IS HILARIOUS AND THE SEXUAL TENSION IS SO SEXUAL...AND TENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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“I’d put good money on him lurking in the Prince’s bedroom a few years ago, just waiting to capture that tender moment.”
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLY SHIT ASPARA! THAT WHOLE FIREY SCENE!!! WITH THE HOT FIRE AND THE SWEATY JADEITE AND THE KISS BUT NOT BUT SO MUCH DEEPER THAN A KISS MOMENT! THE AMOUNT OF SELF CONTROL THAT GIRL HAS!! I LOVE THAT HE SURPRISED HER AND SET HER FREE BUT IN THE END HE'S THE ONE LEFT SHAKEN AND OH MY GOSH THAT WHOLE 'LEAVE US' WHEN THEY WERE CAUGHT AND IT WAS JUST SO GOOD! AND THAT SCARY FIRE PREMONITION THINGY!!!!
I LOVE THIS FIC? HAVE I TOLD YOU THAT ENOUGH? HAVE I?
NEPHRITE IS AWESOME! DO NOT SPEED UP THE PACE, DO YOU HEAR ME WOMAN? I WANT THIS TO LAST AS LONG AS IT IS PHYSICALLY ABLE TO DO SO!
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:DDD do me a favor and tell me if the pace starts to suck balls? the last chapter i wanted them to get laid so badly i was afraid i rushed it X_X
THE SWEATY JADEITE
OBV MY FAV PART OF THIS WHOLE STORY.
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